PIANISSIMO
I smell her sex.
My greedy wench’s cunt
Is calling me.
She must wait …
I tease,
Hot breath,
Roving fingers not touching
Moving just above her tortured skin.
She begs …
My tongue touches
Briefly, sporadically,
Driving her wild.
Slowly …
Oh so slowly and softly,
My flat soft tongue
Plays her outer labia,
Inner labia
And finally her clit.
She moans.
Adagio …
Steady rhythm,
Piano throughout.
Legato,
Irregular patterns.
I play her pussy as a violin.
“No harder than this wench”.
Crescendo …
Inside her body
Tension rises
Little whimpers
Change to moans.
Her body writhes freely
As her mind lets go
She flies.
Her back arches …
Curses change to low-pitched
Solar plexus groans.
She hangs there
For what seems like an eternity.
Her body shudders …
My face is covered in her cum.
I gradually slow down the tempo
The piano carries on
Her body wilts
Satiation point is reached.
Lento …
Slowly I bring her down.
Pianissimo now
Her sensitivity so high
Piano is agonisingly painful
It is far, far too hard.
Gently …
I lift myself,
Move up her body,
Then lower myself
Full length onto her
My body a blanket covering her
Giving warmth and love.
In feather-light kisses
We share the nectar of our love.
7th November 2005
Author notes
AFRICAN GROUP
I wrote this when I was in a new, very beautiful, passionate relationship with another woman. This is a first for me and I am having a wonderful time learning how to sexually please her. I am her Mistress and she is my submissive. Our relationship started as a BDSM one and has recently moved into a full-on sexual relationship. Two months down the line I feel more complete now than I have ever done in my life.
Written November 7th, 2005
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Yummy
I can't believe i have never read your poetry before!
Hi Moira. Love your work.
xxx
Beth
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A very good piece here. I enjoyed this adn must say...Damn that was HOT! Thank you for entering into my challenge.
*Ktulu Blackwolfe* -
great write... i need some time alone now
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Well Done my Love and Congratulations on this win ! It is a true reflection of a amazing work of art!
~dins~
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Congratulations Moira, this was an exquisite piece and it is well deserving of this win. You outdid yourself my friend - I loved this piece from the first moment you posted it - every stanza is filled with love and lust - WELL DONE!!!!!
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Thank you for your kind words Lust. I am so glad that you enjoyed the write.
~ Moira
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How do I answer you my love? Your words make me feel so humble, yet so proud to be on this journey with you. Our love is truly a ‘pas de deux’ as you so beautifully described. We both have the most wonderful appreciation and respect of the gift that is our relationship. It is as if the universe has bestowed upon us this time together in order to lift us onto a higher plane of existence. Wow!
~ Moira (the extra two are from Richard and Carol)
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Thank you drmergurl for your kind words. As this is my first truly erotic write, I do not feel qualified to suggest pointers to you – there are many others who are far more experienced that could assist you. You are welcome to ask questions via IM.
~ Moira
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Thank you for your kind words Desire. I am glad you enjoyed the write. Thanks for the congrats on my new relationship. It is truly very special.
~ Moira
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Wow Dog Man. Thank you. You have expressed your appreciation in such a poetic way and with such generosity. I will endeavour to continue my recitals in this way!
~ Moira.
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Thank you Linda for your lovely words. Yes, my muse is most certainly my inspiration! I thoroughly enjoyed writing this piece and am so glad that you enjoyed the read.
~ Moira
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Oh thank you doug for your kind words. I am especially glad that you were able to enjoy the musical metaphors to the full.
~ Moira
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Thank you Kafekissa. This is the first time that I have written true erotica. I am so glad that you liked it and were aroused by it
– that is the best kind of praise!
~ Moira
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Carol, thank you for your highly valued comments. I am so glad that you enjoyed this read. Thank you for the two roses and the good wishes. I will most certainly pass the second rose on to my love!
~ Moira
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Thank you for your kind words Elba. Yes my dear sub and I do enjoy a remarkably close bond on many levels. We are both revelling in the joys of discovering each other on all these levels. I thoroughly enjoyed this write. I thank you for the contest.
~ Moira
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Terrific!
Very beautiful! very well written and its HOT! Whats left to be said. Its amazing. You did a really terrific job writing this poem. Keep up the amazing writes. And good luck in the contest
Peace
Lust
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Erotic & Sensual
This is a beautiful love/erotica poem. What a delightful poem this was to read... a loving experience. I like the words You used... the intensity of loving Your dear sub and apparently she loved it too. Thank you for the wonderful gift of Your pen Madam, and also for entering the contest. Good Luck!
~Elba
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Truly Amazing!
O My Love, This is a beautiful reflection of the Merging of both body and soul. You are an amazing Mistress and a special friend, who I am honored to share my life and my Love with. Our love is a true Par de Deux, two souls uniting in exquisite harmony, moving to the heartbeat of a universal composition. Thank You, For allowing me to share this space in time with you….I Honour You ~dini~
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Wow, beautiful. You paint a lovely picture...the words carrying us through the change in your relationship, as well as a wonderfully erotic write. Perhaps you can lend me some pointers? Congratulations on your new relationship. Blessed be
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Sensual and HOT
Beautiful sensual write you have written here and definitely gives exotic images of sexual paradise...
Thank you for sharing this with us...
Congrats on your new relationship
Best wishes to you in the contest.........
Desire
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I have played this piano myself, a few times, although I think not quite so eloquently as you have portrayed here. It is an art that I hope to hone my skills in, and perhaps then share as beautifully.
Well done!
peace
doug
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Oh thank you Richard! I am so very glad that you liked this write. It flowed so easily from the pen as I was speaking from fresh experience. I did have fun with the mingling of musical terms into my lover's 'concerto', as you so aptly describe this piece. Thank you especially for the two roses - a special gift! Moira
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Bravo!!!
This was just beautiful! Very very HOT, but also very filled with love and passion-just the kind of erotica I like. Richard referred me here, and it was definitely worth the trip over! I love the way you worked in the musical references, very elegant indeed. My feminine, um...soul is on fire!
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