Beautiful crimson
Spills from your most primal fount -
My tongue laps across
The forming wound, capturing
Your sweet lifeblood lovingly.
Author notes
Hmm'... Yes. My first attempt at a Tanka. Not so sure I like it, nor half of the other poetry forms I've been trying here of late.. But, it's the best way to grow as a poet. ^ ^;
If you know what a Tanka is, and know for a fact this is NOT one, then let me know that, too -- please and thank you. ^ ^;
Written October 27th, 2005
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OH EM GEE! VERY hawt! I will do it! *nodnodnod*
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Oh em ghee!
Drabbles about blood and sex would be, like, SO FUCKING HAWT. ♥ I would read them every night, and, and, and, have dreams about.. Uhm.. "Bad things" .. o o; ~ GIGGLE. ~
Glad you liked it, deary. ^ ^; -
BUT IT IS A TANKA!
And I really like it because it's hawt and sexy and blood! THERE'S BLOOD! And hawtness and blood ALWAYS go togetherrrrr! <3
So pretty. You make me wanna write drabbles about sex and blood. o__o Or tankas! <3
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