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Worth of Your Smile

In that simple smile that lifts me so high
The one that seems to always bring me by

It's almost like that smile was given just for me
But I know you put it on your face for all the world to see

When you take that moment to smile it lights up the entire room
It takes away the darkness and suppresses every bit of gloom

Even when your smile isn't on your outward face
It shows from the inside all over the entire place

It's hard not to smile back when I see you standing there
Your contagious smile constantly lets others know you care

And even if you don't know the worth of your smile
Just knowing it's there makes it all worth while

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Written July 25th, 2005

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  • visagenoir
    August 6, 2005
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    isn't it weird when you hear the exact words you are thinking put in a slightly differnt way coming out of the mouth of a different person. i love this poem so much i totally agree. there's some people that even if you feel you hate them the moment they smile and you know it's real it turns your whole opinion of them around.
  • chewy
    July 28, 2005
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    nice write! i dont know what to say im a horrible commenting person but i like! ok much love!
    {chewy}
  • x9DramaQueen0x
    July 27, 2005
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    I like this poem.. i totally kno watcha mean, its's kinda like my whole hug thing..lol.. YOU always make ME smile.. i luv you!
  • Chiefy
    July 26, 2005
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    YAY!! lol, go Molly!!! I really liked this poem!! You're a really good poet...you always..."express" your feelings and thoughts super well. I love you soooo much!!! *muah*

  • Lady Rouge
    July 26, 2005
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    Excellent

    hey this is pretty good I really like it
    I know how it is when someone just always makes you smile, from afar or closeby....or even just the thought of that person or something they've once told you.
    Ahhh let's all smile together now heh
    Anywho, great write, Molly! Thanks for sharing too
    Take care my friend, now and forever!

    ♥ Lady Rouge
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