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She doesn't say a word

Say....
say...

O fuck !
She doesn't say a word...
I wanted to make up
but the stream wasn't, my way..
my way..the lost highway
say..
say..
say say say..
But there is nothing wrong with her..
(say...say..)

O I just died of my sins..
the least i can tell..
On my way to hell..
Hell..
Hell..
Alone in my grave,
I do my Mary Jane,
and the stolen away Cocaine,
driving me insane..
say..
but there is nothing wrong with her,
say..
but she doesn't say a word,
I wanted to make-up,
but the stream wasn't..my way,
My way,the lost highway,
say..
say..
say say say
but there is nothing wrong with her,
say..
but she doesn't say a word.

Pray..
Pray..
I pray..for a life,
So give..me a life,
not of a Masochist,
not even Jesus Christ,
the one..of my own...
the one..of my own.
the one..of my own.

Say..
Say..
she doesn't say a word,
I wanted to make-up,
but the stream wasn't..my way
My way, the lost highway.
say..
say..
say say say
but there is nothing wrong with her,

but there is nothing wrong with her,

but there is nothing wrong with her..
(say...)

Free falling...
I'm free falling

I'm free falling....

Author notes

STATUTORY WARNING: THIS IS IS A ROCK SONG LYRICS...
Another of my spontaneous emission of emotions..

Mary Jane  

Fav Bands

AC/DC
Deep Purple
Black Sabbath
Green Day
Metallica
Ozzy..to name a few
Written July 18th, 2005

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Comments

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  • StonerChica
    February 19, 2006
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    whoah, this is my fav i think. good job.

  • epitaph-macabre
    September 25, 2005
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    OMG another great one i can almost hear the lyrics....

  • Ashtaen Lady Shadow
    August 5, 2005
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    hey good lyrics
    and good luck getting your band together sorry i couldnt help out
    -*-Danielle-*-

  • Lady Voldemort silver member
    August 3, 2005
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    cool

    hehe this was funny. I saw it on the group board for "for the love of Green Day" and wanted to check out the whole thing. it's awesome. you should perform it. keep writing.

    MORSMORDRE!
    - AleX -
  • camus
    July 24, 2005
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    Enigmatic

    The repeated refrain not only reinforces the powerful rhythm but also adds a sense of chaos, the chaos that might be part and parcel of the world of the "cocaine" addict. It's more like a stream of consciousness than a coherent statement but I get the feeling that this was the intention in the first place. This was certainly different to criticise and to appreciate. I did take to it. camus

  • PrabhuDayal Khattar gold member
    July 24, 2005
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    A Life is a poem.

    A musical write with rythem too ..The composer has to do a justice with it if it is to be recorded in audio format.The flow of the song have been maintained and also the thoughts are travelling in musical way.I appreciate this work.prabhudayal khttar

  • Sonja
    July 24, 2005
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    I think it could be a nice song, but it depands of music.
    My best wishes!

  • parth
    July 24, 2005
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    hey mayank,
    nice lyrics for a rock song. i agree with ankeeta that u shoudn't have started with a foul word.
    anyways,
    nice write.
    parth.
  • AmyKareena
    July 24, 2005
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    Lots of repeativeness; which I'm sure is good for song lyrics. I'm not a good just of lyrics myself, I stick with poetry. Good luck to you
  • p
    July 22, 2005
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    cool...all the best for your band..lol..anyway Mary jane is a nice name..how did you come up with it?
  • confused1 24 7
    July 20, 2005
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    cool song. i think its cool.

  • -Miss-Samantha-
    July 20, 2005
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    i like this song. it really reminds me of something greenday would sing. i take it you like them by your username, but i coulg be wrong. anyways, great job. i like it a lots. keep up the great work.

    love sam

  • Mark Rickerby gold member
    July 20, 2005
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    Hey Mayank,

    This was a little abstract for me but interesting. Of course, who can write a song about a woman and not make it abstract. Even Freud couldn't figure them out. haha I'd like to hear the music that goes with it. Good luck with getting the band together.

    Mark
  • XxAsianBabexX
    July 20, 2005
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    i thought this was pretty good too...ummmm....? do you actually have a rthym for this or is just something you made up to where you want people to think its a song...? well, above all that, it really was good....keep it up...ok...thanx....!

  • Ankeeta silver member
    July 20, 2005
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    hey this really rocks ..........well the word fuck didnt do with me ...anyways I liked it overall!
    i hope you come up with your band soon
    luck and wishes
    ankita
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