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For Lionheart

Darkness fell
within my
cold heart

Until one
day, I
met you

The hands
of fate
pulled us close

You've thawed
my heart
to completeness

True love
and friendship
given to me

So now
I say
Thank you

I know
I'm not
alone anymore

I only
hope you
know the same

You have
made a special
spot in my
heart

Author notes

This is dedicated to Richard (lionheart). I know I haven't know you that long, but I do love you, and you are truly a blessing in my life. Thank you for always being there.         (#4)
Written March 24th, 2005

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  • RoseShadowedLove
    February 5, 2006
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    WOW. this is just beautiful. Dont change ne thing, its great to write to someone, but i dont let them know...when they read it they will understand...but thats jus me, either way great job. u have talent, dont waste it.

    ~Enchanted~

  • SexyAngel0418
    March 28, 2005
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    Awww... This is so sweet... It is a beautiful tribute to your friend... Awesome job... I would say good luck in the contest but it is too late for that... LOL

    Hugs,
    Beth

  • pattyann4500
    March 25, 2005
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    This is lovely and obviously straight from your heart. Sometimes we can love someone so easily that it takes our breath away.

    Good job. Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest. Hugs, Patricia

  • Joe Spencer
    March 24, 2005
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    You may be feeling lonely; it may mean that you have a sense of balance in your life between being with others and being alone, and that you feel loved and cared about. By this it is so strong that, even if you are by yourself, you feel bonded to someone, that other poeple are there and will be there in spirit if not in person for you always. You may have "true" friends and close family and the security of having someone there for you when you need them at times when you need them most.

  • Lionheart
    March 24, 2005
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    Awww this is so sweet. I really don't deserve a tribute like this but thank you. I am delighted to be your friend.

  • Diamond2007
    March 24, 2005
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    Thanks Penny. I actually can write free form very well, it's form that I have issues with I guess you have it one way or the other lol.
  • PennyB
    March 24, 2005
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    This is so sweet! It is just a great tribute that is very well written. You make free form seem so effortless. Good Luck in the contest! hugs, Penny
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