i remember the first time i saw you,
my heart started beating so fast i couldn't take it,
the first time u spoke to me i couldn't get a word out i was speechless.
i remember when i used to stare at you,
the most beautiful girl i ever seen.
from the first moment, i knew i wanted to be with you.
i remember running my fingers through yours,
the first time i kissed,
the first time u told me u loved me.
i remember the first day we went out,
my hand got so sweaty the first time we held hands,
i don't remember when i was so nervous.
i remember the first time i made u a mixed CD,
the look on your face,
that beautiful smile,
how your eyes lite up.
being with you was the most amazing thing ever,
somtimes it would seem too much like an amazing dream that i didnt want to end.
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Written March 24th, 2005
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that is SOOO sweet. awww!
this is wonderful -
Exellent
Awww that was so sweet I have tears
That was great
Luv Playboi
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Wow , its such a sweet poem , really I mean that !!! You're such a romantic people, dont you ?!?! Well , I can relate and remind me about the first date too !! hihihihihi .. Good job , nicely done and romantic !!!
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oh well. girls will be girls
now i feel a little bad about writing that. i'll get over it. bye friend........... -
i'll live through what ever life gives me. ev
I wanted to read this again. Just to see if you really wrote it about me. It sounds like you did. Maybe you did love me at one time, or you just thought you did. whatever, it doesn't matter now. oh, just want to wish you luck on your date. i hope everything goes well. and yes, i really do mean it. i hope you have fun. not to much now. it is the first date and all.
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AWWWWWWWWW this is so omg a-d-o-r-a-b-l-e. omg how cute awww i just wanted to cry that is soo so so so sooooooooooooo sweet you guys are really lucky to have each other HOW CUTE i loved this great write
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beautiful poem
Hi sweety. This poem is really sweet. And I didn't think you felt all of this for me. But why should I think different? You're always doing things to see my smile. I love you. And wonderful, wonderful, wonderful poem.
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Aww this is such a sweet poem full of so many romantic memories which I liked a lot
You expressed this love in such a genuine, beautiful and uncliched way- keep writing because this was lovely
All the best,
Pozo
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