Well, most of the time I try to make my poems rhyme while keeping in touch with the whole meaning of the poem.I mean,it would be really confusing if one minute I was talking about death and the next I was talking about oranges? LAUGH OUT LOUD!
Anyway,if you EVER see a typo in one of my poems,let me know okay?I make alot of typos sometimes. XX
Well,in my spare time I play video games and hang with my friends,so sometimes I'll write a poem about one of the two.I once wrote these poems about four of the charicters from Drakenguard. I love that game! It has inspired such great stuff!
Also, I beleive that if a poem or song doesn't come from the heart as well as the head,it might as well have been never written at all. So which is why I write only on stuff I care about.
My faveorite quotes are:
Sometimes the heart can be weak...and sometimes it may even give in... but deep inside,there's a light that never goes out. -Sora,Kingdom Hearts
Sometimes,all the awsners you need lie in silence,and the questions are in your tears. -Me ,I forget when. xD
Yes,a heart can halucinate if it's completely starved for love. -Jewel, Goodbye Alice in Wonderland
I also like mangas... ^^;;; Like??Okay,okay...I'm ADDICTED. xD Hence the name... Peach CHOBIT.If you get that refrence you get a cookie!!
Oh,one last note before you go! I have no spine when it comes to critiques,so If you have one please don't hold back! It will help me learn to take critisism better! <333
Anyway,if you EVER see a typo in one of my poems,let me know okay?I make alot of typos sometimes. XX
Well,in my spare time I play video games and hang with my friends,so sometimes I'll write a poem about one of the two.I once wrote these poems about four of the charicters from Drakenguard. I love that game! It has inspired such great stuff!
Also, I beleive that if a poem or song doesn't come from the heart as well as the head,it might as well have been never written at all. So which is why I write only on stuff I care about.
My faveorite quotes are:
Sometimes the heart can be weak...and sometimes it may even give in... but deep inside,there's a light that never goes out. -Sora,Kingdom Hearts
Sometimes,all the awsners you need lie in silence,and the questions are in your tears. -Me ,I forget when. xD
Yes,a heart can halucinate if it's completely starved for love. -Jewel, Goodbye Alice in Wonderland
I also like mangas... ^^;;; Like??Okay,okay...I'm ADDICTED. xD Hence the name... Peach CHOBIT.If you get that refrence you get a cookie!!
Oh,one last note before you go! I have no spine when it comes to critiques,so If you have one please don't hold back! It will help me learn to take critisism better! <333
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My Poetry
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The crowd goes wild / The stage is set / The people look up / And our eyes met / The days is mine / All eyes on me / The prize in my hand / Victory feels sweet. / The dream has ended / But the chance ha
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It turns out I was wrong
When I thought you were my friend all along. -
I try to catch you as you fall
And continue with this mess.19 lines, 2 comments, September 13, 2006. In Sad -
I'm sorry I said you were worthless.
I'm sorry I said you were scum.
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Jimbob236 on August 1, 2006Oh...ok.
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Peach Chobit on July 31, 2006I already wrote a KH-based poem Jimbo. -pokes Dreath Path-
And I'm working on a poem as we speak! -
Jimbob236 on July 31, 2006Are you going to write a KH poem soon?
Or perhaps you should write one about one of our RPs...that would be interesting. -
Peach Chobit on July 29, 2006Cookie for you,17ShadesOfBlack!
...Oh my gosh,there's a soundtrack! I must have it!
And exuse me as I rush off to go despratly try to find is.Music IS my muse after all!
