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PattibooShow poetry

I grew up on a farm left school at 15 to work on a farm so writing didn't figure high on my list of things I needed to be skilled at to do my work.

Loved reading and copied poems from cards and books, scribbled my own verses from about 12 yrs of age.

I joined a large site for the over fifties in 2007. It has a small forum for poetry where I met fellow poetry lovers and began to understand (with the help of one or two members) more about the structure of poetry and how to improve on what I write.

Critique however was not welcome by most who posted there, so here I am and hopefully here I'll stay.

My Poetry

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  • No lover ever bought for me a rose
    One single rose, to prove their love was true.
    29 lines, 9 comments, November 21. In Humor
  • You’re the devil in disguise
    I am lost within your power;
    47 lines, 9 comments, November 20. In Dark
  • It’s been drawn to my attention
    by those bold enough to mention
    25 lines, 10 comments, November 19. In Humor
  • They teach you how to sow it
    then how to plant it out,
    60 lines, 7 comments, November 18. In Nature, Humor

Guest Book

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  • suecat : Thankyou on October 30
    Thanks Pattiboo, for your kind remarks on my poetry. I am most impressed by yours too! I am definitely a cat person, have spent a huge amount of money on my cat Notso, 13, he has allergies and has had cancers removed from nose. Now I've taken on a stray female named Pumpkin (same shape and colour!) Two cats are becoming too much!!!
    I'm curious about magpies in Great Britain - maybe they're not the same as in Australia?
    Here they are black and white, have a beatiful melodic warbling song. Only in the nesting season (now) do they divebomb anyone who gets close to the nest. Here it is ravens that seem the disagreeable bird, taking the young of other birds, and scavenging rubbish bins etc.
    Sorry, didn't mean this to become a treatise on bird behaviour! best wishes, keep writing!
  • Bluemonday on September 2
    Hi Pat...Yes that's me taken where you have probably trodden in the past, Winchelsea Beach...That was a lifetime ago lol...Your a very astute lady, and your old man is a very lucky chap...Thanks for the lovely comment, they always mean a lot coming from you...luv Dan xx
  • Bluemonday on August 30
    well done with the new jug...loved the poem...Dan x
  • hugh wyles : Dear Pat, on August 25
    If I send you a compliment
    it's very seriously meant
    for any compliment from me
    is not mere idle flattery.

    and I am perfectly sincere
    when I acclaim your sonnets here
    which, out of all that I have seen.
    establish you as "Sonnet Queen."

    I'm sure that I shall never rue
    the day that I discovered you
    and, to implore you, here I stoop,
    in hope you'll join my Favourites' Group.

    Congratulations on having three successive sonnets included in the Wyleian Sonnet Collection.
    With admiration, love and hugs, XXX Hugh.

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