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I do not claim to be a great poet.

Certainly, I may strive to be at times, but I don't come close to my poetic idols, and I'm well aware of that.

I am an avid reader as well as an English major in college. I also participate in musical activities of any kind and have an absurd enjoyment of Twilight, even though I know that it's tripe as far as literature is concerned and will surely be soon forgotten.

In less depressing news, no matter how bad my poetry is, please feel free to review it! I'd love to hear your thoughts as to how it could improve!

Feel free to check out the poetry of a dear friend, and an incredible poet!
http://allpoetry.com/BeautifulDisaster9

Last seen 7 hours ago. Member since February 11, 2008.
I'm a amethyst understanding poet for 25 comments.
I am a 20 year old woman from Virginia (United States)
When I'm not writing, I'm in school or at work.
Visit my homepage at www.myspace.com/alesthikka
I am in the groups Gay Lesbian and Bisexuals Group, To Write Love On Her Arms Tonight, the wiccan arts
I have 25 comments, 49 poems, 2 stories

Poems I'm focused on

a pagan lament of faith

i wonder, at times, how i can have such deep sorrow,
when the Queen of Joy is by my side.

14 lines, 3 comments, August 26. In pagan, spiritual, lament, faith, goddess, triple goddess, moon, elements, priestess

My Poetry

1 - 4 of 49 Show all • Search

let me break.

my wishes are nothing.

35 lines, November 13. In angst, dark, life, death, pain, sad, spiritual, thoughts, blood, cutting
My Vision

i see myself standing there
pale as a ghost, pale as a dream,

15 lines, 1 comment, November 11. In depression, cutting, angst, dark, pain, personal, sad, self-harm, self-injury
You know who you are.

thank the gods for you.
you've always been there, by my side,

17 lines, October 19
Beliefs

you sit down.
don't worry about your other children,

12 lines, October 18. In mother, dysfunctional, pain, personal, sad, thoughts, mom

My Stories

Successful Failure

Joanne looked around her apartment frantically. She needed to find it. Her one freedom, and her only escape. Yet no matter how hard she looked, she couldn't find the box cutter that had become her best friend. Sometimes it se

1346 lines, October 6. In 600-2000 words
Reflections

322 lines, September 1. In <600 words

Guest Book

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tearyeyedbutterfly on February 12, 2008

Hi. I like what you said about your poetry not needing to be perfect, just needing to be sincere. I am like that, too. -Tearyeyed
adema1214 : omg! on February 11, 2008

She popped your cherry how rude!

Love you Long Time;-) hang low!
BeautifulDisaster9 : Muahahaha. on February 11, 2008

I popped your guestbook cherry.

<3 Me love you long time.