Well Ive been told several times my page is boring so now i guess its time to spruce it up some 
. Well my name is patrick in case you couldnt see that from my account name. I am 17yrs old going on 18 very soon yay! I took up writing towards the end of my junior year in highschool and now I am a senior class o 2010 
. The reason i write is for fun, for love, for a release, and to express. Am I a great writer Im not sure I hope to be at some point. Will I write for a profession? Im not sure I dont think I am good enough to be able to do that. My favorite contests to enter into are picture prompts and prose contests just fyi if you want me to enter in one 
. I have played tennis for 7 yrs now and Im decent not great not terrible. I love video games yes I is a 
at times. I am in love with a certain someone named Megan. Shes my redhead geek and im her dork 
. Anything else just ask im pretty open I like everyone on AP except for a couple of people because they are just grrrrrrrrrrr.
Ok passing over the random dancing I feel I need to share my bestest buddy on the site with you all cuz she is so special
Izzy was the first person who I met when I joined the site and ever since then she and I are buds. She showed me the ropes of the site which im still learning. She is an awsome lady 
. I encourage everyone to get to know izzy or Upinthestars NOT stairs 
get it right ....or else 
luff ya izzy u my best bud on here megan still beats you tho
My All Poetry Family
Grandpa-
Grandma- Paralyzed-Dead-Eyes
Mom- Calandra Jane
Dad-
Brother-
Little Sis- TheRpQueen
Little Sis- FragileAngel
Little Sis- darkloverdark
Little Bro-UpInTheStars
Twin-
Cousin-
Cousin-
Family Ghost- Colassal Squid
Financial Advisor- RewriteMyLifeStory
[_] You have a boyfriend/girlfriend. (megans parents damn you sry megan
)
[ ] You have your own room.
[x] You own a cell phone.
[x] You have a mp3 player or ipod.
[x] Your parents are still married.
[x] You love your family.
[x] There is a pool/spa in your backyard.
T0TAL: 5
[x] You dress the way you want to.
[x] You hang out with friends more than once a week.
[x] There is a computer/ laptop in your room.
[ ] You have never been beaten up.
[x] You are allowed to listen to the music you want to.
[ ] Your room is big enough for you
[x] People don't use you for something you have.
[x] You have been to the movies.
T 0 T A L: 11
[_] You have over 500 friends on facebook
[x] You have pictures on facebook
[x] Your parents let you have a facebook
[ ] You get allowance
[x] You collect something normal. (go home and collect your stamps that don't exist julia)
[x] You look forward to going to college
[x] You don't wish you were someone else.
[x] You play a sport.
[x] You want to do something after school.
T 0 T A L: 18
[x] You own a car/truck.
[ ] You usually don't fight with your parents.
[ ] You have never got a failing grade on a report card in your life
[x] You have friends.
[ ] You never got a detention
T O T A L: 20
[x] You know what is going on in the world.(fully aware, yay for me)
[x] You are happy with your life.
[x] You usually aren't sick.
[x] You know more than one language.
[x] You have a screen name.
[x] You own a pet.
[x] You know the words to more than 5 songs.
[x] You don't have any enemies.
T O T A L: 28
Total over all: 28
Multiply by 3= 84%
101%+: A+
90-100%: A
80-89%: B
70-79%: C
60-69%: D
00-59%: F
yay, i get a B in life..?
stupid fighting with parents...
+88
_+880
_++88
_++88
__+880
__+888________________________+88
__++880______________________+88
__++888_____+++88__________+++8
__++8888__+++8880++88____+++88
__+++8888+++8880++8888__++888
___++888++8888+++888888++888
___++88++8888++8888888++888
___++++++888888888888888888
____++++++88888888888888888
____++++++++000888888888888
_____+++++++000088888888888
______+++++++00088888888888
_______+++++++088888888888
_______+++++++088888888888
________+++++++8888888888
________+++++++0088888888
________++++++0088888888
________+++++0008888888
ROCK ON!!!!!!!
_______________________________________________________
(\ /)
(O.o)
(>"< This is Mr.Bunny Please Paste him on your page in order to help him with his mission to DOMINATE THE WORLD!!!
_______________________________________________________
(\ /)
===== This is that little bunny...
(O.o)
==== the one trying to dominate the world...
===== I tied him up, and cut off his foot
===== to give luck to the rusty spoon wielding squirrels.
/_|
________________________________________________________
"To Every Guy...
To every guy that's said, "Sex CAN wait"
To every guy that's said, "You're beautiful."
To every guy that was never too busy to drive across town to see her.
To every guy that gives flowers and a card when she is sick.
To every guy who has given her flowers just because.
To every guy that said he would die for her.
To every guy that really would.
To every guy that took time to do what she wanted to do.
To every guy that she cried in front of.
To every guy that holds hands with her.
To every guy that kisses her with meaning.
To every guy that hugs her when she's sad.
To every guy that hugs her for no reason at all.
To every guy who would give their jacket up for her.
To every guy that calls to make sure she got home safe.
To every guy that would sit and wait for her for hours
just to see her for ten minutes.
To every guy that would give his seat up.
To every guy that just wants to cuddle.
To every guy that reassured her that she was beautiful
no matter what.
To every guy who told his secrets to her.
To every guy that tried to show how much he cared
through every word and every breath.
To every guy that thought maybe this could be the one.
To every guy that believed in her dreams.
To every guy that would have done anything
so she could achieve them.
To every guy that never laughed at her
when she told him her dreams.
To every guy that walked her to her car.
To every guy that gave his heart.
To every guy who prays that she is happy
even if you are not with her.
...This one bulletin is for you...
Not many girls appreciate nice guys anymore...
And because of this, there are not many left out there...
i guarantee 90% of the men on your page will not repost this cuz they care more about their image
If you are a nice guy repost this with "We're a Dying Breed "
If you are a girl that thinks every guy should treat a girl this way
repost this with: "To Every Guy...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
are your palms sweaty, is your heart racing? and is your voice caught within your chest?
it isn`t love, its like.
you can`t keep your eyes or hands off them, am i right?
it isn`t love, it`s lust.
are you proud and eager to show them off?
it isn`t love, its luck.
do you want them because you know they`re there?
it isn`t love, its loneliness.
are you there just cuz its what everyone wants?
it isn`t love, its loyalty.
Do you stay for their confessions of love, because you don`t wanna hurt them?
it isn`t love, its pity.
are you willing to give all of your favorite things for their sake?
it isn`t love, its charity.
are you there because they kissed you, or held your hand?
it isn`t love, its unconfident.
do you pardon their faults because you care about them?
it isn`t love, its friendship.
do you tell them everyday they are the only one you think of?
it isn`t love, its a lie.
But do you except there faults because they`re a part of who you are? Do you see their true heart, and touch your soul so deeply it hurts? Are you attracted to others, but stay with them faithfully without regret? Would you give them your heart, your life, your death and stay because a blinding in comprehensible mix of pain and elation pulls you close and holds you? now thats LOVE...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Also i forgot I draw alot like alot alot cuz its fun and im good at it
Heres a couple examples from my portfolio throughout the past 4 yrs of my life
http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?pid=30229613&l=7656fee22a&id=1440790765
http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?pid=30447766&l=a00c62b8ff&id=1440790765
http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?pid=30229618&l=34acd97b5f&id=1440790765
http://viewmorepics.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=viewImage&friendID=234675128&albumID=322817&imageID=10116674
http://viewmorepics.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=viewImage&friendID=234675128&albumID=322817&imageID=10116682
http://viewmorepics.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=viewImage&friendID=234675128&albumID=322817&imageID=10116693
http://viewmorepics.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=viewImage&friendID=234675128&albumID=322817&imageID=10116701
http://viewmorepics.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=viewImage&friendID=234675128&albumID=322817&imageID=10116717
http://viewmorepics.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=viewImage&friendID=234675128&albumID=322817&imageID=10116724
http://viewmorepics.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=viewImage&friendID=234675128&albumID=322817&imageID=10116729
http://viewmorepics.myspace.com/index.cfm?
fuseaction=viewImage&friendID=234675128&albumID=322817&imageID=10116739
. Well my name is patrick in case you couldnt see that from my account name. I am 17yrs old going on 18 very soon yay! I took up writing towards the end of my junior year in highschool and now I am a senior class o 2010 . The reason i write is for fun, for love, for a release, and to express. Am I a great writer Im not sure I hope to be at some point. Will I write for a profession? Im not sure I dont think I am good enough to be able to do that. My favorite contests to enter into are picture prompts and prose contests just fyi if you want me to enter in one . I have played tennis for 7 yrs now and Im decent not great not terrible. I love video games yes I is a at times. I am in love with a certain someone named Megan. Shes my redhead geek and im her dork . Anything else just ask im pretty open I like everyone on AP except for a couple of people because they are just grrrrrrrrrrr. Ok passing over the random dancing I feel I need to share my bestest buddy on the site with you all cuz she is so special
Izzy was the first person who I met when I joined the site and ever since then she and I are buds
. She showed me the ropes of the site which im still learning. She is an awsome lady . I encourage everyone to get to know izzy or Upinthestars NOT stairs get it right ....or else luff ya izzy u my best bud on here
megan still beats you tho My All Poetry Family
Grandpa-
Grandma- Paralyzed-Dead-Eyes
Mom- Calandra Jane
Dad-
Brother-
Little Sis- TheRpQueen
Little Sis- FragileAngel
Little Sis- darkloverdark
Little Bro-UpInTheStars
Twin-
Cousin-
Cousin-
Family Ghost- Colassal Squid
Financial Advisor- RewriteMyLifeStory
[_] You have a boyfriend/girlfriend. (megans parents damn you sry megan
)[ ] You have your own room.
[x] You own a cell phone.
[x] You have a mp3 player or ipod.
[x] Your parents are still married.
[x] You love your family.
[x] There is a pool/spa in your backyard.
T0TAL: 5
[x] You dress the way you want to.
[x] You hang out with friends more than once a week.
[x] There is a computer/ laptop in your room.
[ ] You have never been beaten up.
[x] You are allowed to listen to the music you want to.
[ ] Your room is big enough for you
[x] People don't use you for something you have.
[x] You have been to the movies.
T 0 T A L: 11
[_] You have over 500 friends on facebook
[x] You have pictures on facebook
[x] Your parents let you have a facebook
[ ] You get allowance
[x] You collect something normal. (go home and collect your stamps that don't exist julia)
[x] You look forward to going to college
[x] You don't wish you were someone else.
[x] You play a sport.
[x] You want to do something after school.
T 0 T A L: 18
[x] You own a car/truck.
[ ] You usually don't fight with your parents.
[ ] You have never got a failing grade on a report card in your life
[x] You have friends.
[ ] You never got a detention
T O T A L: 20
[x] You know what is going on in the world.(fully aware, yay for me)
[x] You are happy with your life.
[x] You usually aren't sick.
[x] You know more than one language.
[x] You have a screen name.
[x] You own a pet.
[x] You know the words to more than 5 songs.
[x] You don't have any enemies.
T O T A L: 28
Total over all: 28
Multiply by 3= 84%
101%+: A+
90-100%: A
80-89%: B
70-79%: C
60-69%: D
00-59%: F
yay, i get a B in life..?
stupid fighting with parents...
+88
_+880
_++88
_++88
__+880
__+888________________________+88
__++880______________________+88
__++888_____+++88__________+++8
__++8888__+++8880++88____+++88
__+++8888+++8880++8888__++888
___++888++8888+++888888++888
___++88++8888++8888888++888
___++++++888888888888888888
____++++++88888888888888888
____++++++++000888888888888
_____+++++++000088888888888
______+++++++00088888888888
_______+++++++088888888888
_______+++++++088888888888
________+++++++8888888888
________+++++++0088888888
________++++++0088888888
________+++++0008888888
ROCK ON!!!!!!!
_______________________________________________________
(\ /)
(O.o)
(>"< This is Mr.Bunny Please Paste him on your page in order to help him with his mission to DOMINATE THE WORLD!!!
_______________________________________________________
(\ /)
===== This is that little bunny...
(O.o)
==== the one trying to dominate the world...
===== I tied him up, and cut off his foot
===== to give luck to the rusty spoon wielding squirrels.
/_|
________________________________________________________
"To Every Guy...
To every guy that's said, "Sex CAN wait"
To every guy that's said, "You're beautiful."
To every guy that was never too busy to drive across town to see her.
To every guy that gives flowers and a card when she is sick.
To every guy who has given her flowers just because.
To every guy that said he would die for her.
To every guy that really would.
To every guy that took time to do what she wanted to do.
To every guy that she cried in front of.
To every guy that holds hands with her.
To every guy that kisses her with meaning.
To every guy that hugs her when she's sad.
To every guy that hugs her for no reason at all.
To every guy who would give their jacket up for her.
To every guy that calls to make sure she got home safe.
To every guy that would sit and wait for her for hours
just to see her for ten minutes.
To every guy that would give his seat up.
To every guy that just wants to cuddle.
To every guy that reassured her that she was beautiful
no matter what.
To every guy who told his secrets to her.
To every guy that tried to show how much he cared
through every word and every breath.
To every guy that thought maybe this could be the one.
To every guy that believed in her dreams.
To every guy that would have done anything
so she could achieve them.
To every guy that never laughed at her
when she told him her dreams.
To every guy that walked her to her car.
To every guy that gave his heart.
To every guy who prays that she is happy
even if you are not with her.
...This one bulletin is for you...
Not many girls appreciate nice guys anymore...
And because of this, there are not many left out there...
i guarantee 90% of the men on your page will not repost this cuz they care more about their image
If you are a nice guy repost this with "We're a Dying Breed "
If you are a girl that thinks every guy should treat a girl this way
repost this with: "To Every Guy...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~are your palms sweaty, is your heart racing? and is your voice caught within your chest?
it isn`t love, its like.
you can`t keep your eyes or hands off them, am i right?
it isn`t love, it`s lust.
are you proud and eager to show them off?
it isn`t love, its luck.
do you want them because you know they`re there?
it isn`t love, its loneliness.
are you there just cuz its what everyone wants?
it isn`t love, its loyalty.
Do you stay for their confessions of love, because you don`t wanna hurt them?
it isn`t love, its pity.
are you willing to give all of your favorite things for their sake?
it isn`t love, its charity.
are you there because they kissed you, or held your hand?
it isn`t love, its unconfident.
do you pardon their faults because you care about them?
it isn`t love, its friendship.
do you tell them everyday they are the only one you think of?
it isn`t love, its a lie.
But do you except there faults because they`re a part of who you are? Do you see their true heart, and touch your soul so deeply it hurts? Are you attracted to others, but stay with them faithfully without regret? Would you give them your heart, your life, your death and stay because a blinding in comprehensible mix of pain and elation pulls you close and holds you? now thats LOVE...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Also i forgot I draw alot like alot alot cuz its fun and im good at it
Heres a couple examples from my portfolio throughout the past 4 yrs of my life
http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?pid=30229613&l=7656fee22a&id=1440790765
http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?pid=30447766&l=a00c62b8ff&id=1440790765
http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?pid=30229618&l=34acd97b5f&id=1440790765
http://viewmorepics.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=viewImage&friendID=234675128&albumID=322817&imageID=10116674
http://viewmorepics.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=viewImage&friendID=234675128&albumID=322817&imageID=10116682
http://viewmorepics.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=viewImage&friendID=234675128&albumID=322817&imageID=10116693
http://viewmorepics.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=viewImage&friendID=234675128&albumID=322817&imageID=10116701
http://viewmorepics.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=viewImage&friendID=234675128&albumID=322817&imageID=10116717
http://viewmorepics.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=viewImage&friendID=234675128&albumID=322817&imageID=10116724
http://viewmorepics.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=viewImage&friendID=234675128&albumID=322817&imageID=10116729
http://viewmorepics.myspace.com/index.cfm?
fuseaction=viewImage&friendID=234675128&albumID=322817&imageID=10116739
- Last seen 6 hours ago. Member since May 19.
- I'm a carnelian hope poet for 147 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "I couldn't help but follow the crowd on the path to individuality.".
- I am a 18 year old man from Texas (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a busboy at a resturant.
- I am in the groups Girls Talk Boys Talk by Aurielle NEW, Poetry Circus, The People of Prose, the name is sadly not here
- I have 147 comments, 2 contests, 2 columns, 52 poems
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My mom may have cancer we found out today from the doctor. She has 3 lesions on her liver and all are getting progressively worse. Dad still doesnt have a job its been 2 years now without one. Its wierd being the only one in the family with a job and only being 17. I dont know what to do if I lose my mom. I dont knowNovember 12, 100 words. → 4 comments, Add one?
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chilled-flames on November 21rock on man
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Still Life on October 27Dude. You're an 18 y/o MAN xD I luff it!
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darkloverdark on October 27Hmmm, well I never knew I was your little sis... :l
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UpInTheStars on October 21Patrick!!! You're not dreaming! It's really me!
HI!
I came back! but only to check messages and stuff since my friend told me that you and CJ missed me. 
but here I am! I went two weeks without this place! I am so proud of myself! Aren't you proud of me? I gave in to temptation but only because I missed you guys so much!
GET ON AND TALK TO ME!!
I hope I am still your bestest buddy.
