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NO MORE WRITER'S BLOCK  does a dance ....Yeah, I gave up on that difficult piece....so yeah, oh well.  

     Yes, that is correct.  I am, once again, on all poetry.  These writing expiernces will be interesting.  The constant ranting, whining, and selfish comments shall begin.  
   
     I will promise one thing, I will not delete and comments made on here, positive or negative, I can take it.  The only technicality is that if my guestbook is overflowing with comments, or if the comment is meaningless, it will be deleted(this meaning my guestbook will not excede more than 5 web pages).  
   
     I am a punk, yes that sounds materialistic, but I have my reasons.  For people to get just a glimpse of what I am like, I must be materialistic.  I really do try not to be this way, but hopefully with my writing, you will get a much deeper look at myself.
     
     I tend to have massive amounts of spelling errors.  I am working on that problem, but for now I will just have to edit them when ever I catch one.
   
     If you haven't noticed, I like to ramble.  Going on, and on about a meaningless topic, for forever, and ever...  I also am a big fan of free verse poetry.  The ones that rhyme, either happen unintentionaly, or it just flows.  I try not to force the rhymes into the poem, because then it makes the stanza seem 'chunky'.
   
     If you like my backgrounds, and would like to use them, just leave me an IM or leave a comment in my guestbook.  I will get it to as soon as possible.  Any other requests, do as instructed above.

     So, in conclusion, please see me as a poet, and you are welcome to comment on anything that you feel the need to.  Enjoy.

     - This is perhaps the coolest thing I have ever seen... o.O l..l   ROCK ON -

     - ...now watch...certain people will of a sudden have a obsession with these songs and bands listed below...I only say this because it has happened in the past... -  
     
     - My favorite song and band are below-

- Tears - by - Rufio -                                  

I sit and hear you sleep,
I don't want to go,
Your there beside me,      
But your so far away,
I talk to you,
While your asleep,
You can't hear a word,
You can hear everything.

Tears are feelings we can't say,
Tears mean that you care,
Tears are mixed emotions,
Tears are more than tears.
                         
The pooring rain,
From my eyes,
Means to much,
To keep inside.
                               
I sit and watch you leave,
My life forever,
I know you'll be gone so long,
My last words are nothing,
And I tell you I care,
And nothing more,
I can't say how I feel,
So I cry.
                               
Tears are feelings we can't say,
Tears mean that you care,
Tears are mixed emotions,
Tears are more than tears.
                               
It's the light,
Behind the shadow,
That sacred face,
Behind the mask.
                               
Tears are feelings we can't say,
Tears mean that you care,
Tears are mixed emotions,
Tears are more than tears.
                               
- Some of my other favorite bands are -

The Ataris
Blink 182
Cold
Coldplay
Dashboard Confessional
Fenix TX
Janes Addiction
Letters to Cleo
Hopesfall
Incubus
Jimmy Eat World
John Mayer
Save Ferris
SR-71
Trapt
Wheatus
Allister
Mad Caddies
Lagwagon
The Unseen
Bouncing Souls
Mighty Mighty Bostones
Andrew W.K.
Me First and the Gimme Gimmes
Missing 23rd
Authority Zero
Pistol Grip
Death by Sterio
Dropkick Murphys
Swingin' Utters
The Casualties
Audio Karate
Rise Against
Aviod One Thing
U.S. Bombs
The Used
Less Than Jake
Thrice
Slick Shoes
No Use for a Name
Tsunami Bomb

Face to Face
Glassjaw
Coheed and Cambria
Poison the Well
Letter Kills
Yellowcard
Jackson
Senses Fail
Stairwell
Useless I.D.
Matchbox Romance
The Movie Life
August Premier
The Early November
Kicked in the Head
S.T.U.N.
Taking Back Sunday
Finch
Home Grown
Rancid
Anti-Flag
Rx Bandits
Madcap
A.F.I.
Bigwig
The Vandals
Flogging Molly
Kill Your Idols
Living End
Lost City Angels
No More Black
Buck-O-None
Autopilot Off
Agent 51
Divit
Ozma
504Plan
Zwan

- The bands in bold hold a better place in my music listening expierences ^.^; -

- Keep this in mind -

"An Atheist is a man who has no invisible means of support" --Fulton Sheen

"Don't judge me by my failures, but only by my dreams" --SR-71

"She thinks I can't see the smile she's faken, and poses for pictures that aren't being taken" --John Mayer

"You can't have white and black without shades of gray" --Me

Now you may enjoy my poetry...and ROCK ON o.O l..l

  • Last seen on Dec 12 6:34 PM 2004. Member since May 25, 2003.
  • I'm a citrine experience poet for 170 comments.
  • I am a 16 year old guy
  • When I'm not writing, I'm a abstract artist.
  • I have 170 comments, 1 contest, 18 poems

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  • Leah Rose on August 7, 2004
    Hey are you seriously back? That's awesome to hear, looking forward to reading your future works.
    Peace and Love,
    Leah
  • RebelWaltz on February 20, 2004
    awesome music taste by the way - rancid and a.f.i are the best. and the dropkick murpheys are pretty damn cool aswell. i like most of the bands u listed. haha yeah so cool.
    xx faith xx
  • FallenAngel1990 on January 23, 2004
    I MISS YOU COME BACK PLEASE......its emily i think oh well mind doesn't matter i just really miss talking to ya odd ball well if ya get on hit me back please
  • almostthesea on January 10, 2004
    By the way, it's Ed. I changed my name hopefully for good.

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