***you could compare my poetry to "porno-freeviews", its right there, looks good, but it could be 10 times better..if only i payed the whole fucking thing..lol..or in my case.."used my head to write to my best ability"***
I guess I dont really have a particular style of writing.. I dont really know what else to say here..i live for music..guitar is my life..oh, and i hope you enjoy my poems..
...thats all..if u want to know more..just ask..
and to all those wonderin if my mate was ok..he was fine..infact, he didn't need to get his stomach pumped...AND..didnt even have a hangover...the lucky bastard..
Son of a Bit...
Girl: "Forgive me father for i have sinned."
Preist: "what have you done my child?"
Girl: "I called a man a son of a bit**."
Priest: "why did you call him a son of a bit**?"
Girl: "because he touched my hand."
Priest: "like this?" (as he touches her hand)
Girl: "Yes father."
Preist: "that's no reason to call a man a son of a bit**."
Girl: "then he touched my breast."
Preist: "like this?" (as he touched her breast)
Girl: "Yes father."
Preist: "That's no reason to call him a son of a bit**."
Girl: "then he took off my clothes, father."
Preist: "like this?" (as he takes off her clothes)
Girl: "yes father."
Priest: "that's no reason to call him a son of a bit**."
Girl: "then he stuck his you know what into my you know where."
Preist: "like this?" (as he stuck his you know what into you know where)
Girl: "YES FATHER, YES FATHER, YES FATHER!!!"
Priest: (after a few minutes): "that's no reason to call him a son of a bit**."
Girl: "But father he had AIDS!"
Priest: "THAT SON OF A BIT**!!!"
REPOST IF YOU LAUGHED!!
Song Quotes I Like:
"I am my fathers son, 'coz he's a phantom, a mystery and that leaves me NOTHING!"
"I got a crush on a pretty pistol, should I tell her that I feel this way"
"Obituary birthday, your scent is still here in my place of recovery"
"We're all stars now, in the dope show"
"And tonight, we can truly say, together we're invincible"
"Running outta ways to run, I can't see, I can't be, over and over and under mty skin, all this attention is doing me in"
"I could stare into a thousand eyes, but every smile hides a bold-faced lie"
"I hide these scars from prying eyes, incapable of ever knowing why"
"We are the nobodies, wannabe somebodies"
"Lets cut our wrists, like cheap cupons and say that death was on sale today"
"Use just once and destroy, invasion of our piracy, afterbirth of a nation, starve without your skeleton key"
"Wont you believe it it's just my luck"
"I'm killing lonliness with you"
"How does it feel to be locked inside another dream?"
"She seems dressed in all of me, stressed across my shame, all the torment and the pain, leaked through and covered me"
"I miss the comfort in being sad..."
"That place in my mind, is that space that you call mine"
"Gently my mind escapes, to relax in worlds of pleasure, a pleasure that will take my mind off, the reality of my life"
"I got dosed by you and, closer than most to you and, what am i supposed to do and, take it away, I never had it anyway"
"I played doctor for 5 minutes flat, before i cut my heart open, and let the air out"
I guess I dont really have a particular style of writing.. I dont really know what else to say here..i live for music..guitar is my life..oh, and i hope you enjoy my poems..
...thats all..if u want to know more..just ask..
and to all those wonderin if my mate was ok..he was fine..infact, he didn't need to get his stomach pumped...AND..didnt even have a hangover...the lucky bastard..
Son of a Bit...
Girl: "Forgive me father for i have sinned."
Preist: "what have you done my child?"
Girl: "I called a man a son of a bit**."
Priest: "why did you call him a son of a bit**?"
Girl: "because he touched my hand."
Priest: "like this?" (as he touches her hand)
Girl: "Yes father."
Preist: "that's no reason to call a man a son of a bit**."
Girl: "then he touched my breast."
Preist: "like this?" (as he touched her breast)
Girl: "Yes father."
Preist: "That's no reason to call him a son of a bit**."
Girl: "then he took off my clothes, father."
Preist: "like this?" (as he takes off her clothes)
Girl: "yes father."
Priest: "that's no reason to call him a son of a bit**."
Girl: "then he stuck his you know what into my you know where."
Preist: "like this?" (as he stuck his you know what into you know where)
Girl: "YES FATHER, YES FATHER, YES FATHER!!!"
Priest: (after a few minutes): "that's no reason to call him a son of a bit**."
Girl: "But father he had AIDS!"
Priest: "THAT SON OF A BIT**!!!"
REPOST IF YOU LAUGHED!!
Song Quotes I Like:
"I am my fathers son, 'coz he's a phantom, a mystery and that leaves me NOTHING!"
"I got a crush on a pretty pistol, should I tell her that I feel this way"
"Obituary birthday, your scent is still here in my place of recovery"
"We're all stars now, in the dope show"
"And tonight, we can truly say, together we're invincible"
"Running outta ways to run, I can't see, I can't be, over and over and under mty skin, all this attention is doing me in"
"I could stare into a thousand eyes, but every smile hides a bold-faced lie"
"I hide these scars from prying eyes, incapable of ever knowing why"
"We are the nobodies, wannabe somebodies"
"Lets cut our wrists, like cheap cupons and say that death was on sale today"
"Use just once and destroy, invasion of our piracy, afterbirth of a nation, starve without your skeleton key"
"Wont you believe it it's just my luck"
"I'm killing lonliness with you"
"How does it feel to be locked inside another dream?"
"She seems dressed in all of me, stressed across my shame, all the torment and the pain, leaked through and covered me"
"I miss the comfort in being sad..."
"That place in my mind, is that space that you call mine"
"Gently my mind escapes, to relax in worlds of pleasure, a pleasure that will take my mind off, the reality of my life"
"I got dosed by you and, closer than most to you and, what am i supposed to do and, take it away, I never had it anyway"
"I played doctor for 5 minutes flat, before i cut my heart open, and let the air out"
- Last seen on Sep 27 4:05 AM. Member since July 27, 2007.
- I'm a carnelian hope poet for 110 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is life is just an illusion due to lack of alcohol..i guess thats more of a theory..lol.
- I am a 16 year old guy (Ireland)
- When I'm not writing, I'm thinking of her..or playing guitar..(in that order).
- Visit my homepage at www.myspace.com/shaun221
- I am in the groups A Group For the Misunderstood depressed gothic and emo not to mention rockers, A myspace group, All Metal, Aspiring Poets, Candy And Cigarettes, Cutting to bleed the pain awaynot wanting to suffer living another day, For Those Who Want To Improve Their Poems and Meet Friends At the Same Time, Get Read, Lovers Of AFI Unite, Marilyn Manson fans ONLY, Music Rules My Life, System of a Down, The Dark Lounge, You Have Nice Eyes, kids with screwed up parents or families
- I have 110 comments
Poems I'm focused on
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Will you hold my hand, / As we walk through them golden gates, / Just our fingers lingering, / It's getting kinda late. / The gates are clo
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Her face was forgettable, / Like a quick glance at a single snowflake, / Maybe it was because i tried too hard to remember, / Her piercing-blue eyes, / That her image faded from my mind.4 lines, 6 comments, July 27, 2007. In Love
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She doesn't cut anymore, / All thats left are the faint red lines, / -Her stripes, / She wears them with pride, / As she can look back, / At the times where she was worse off, / "Another successful day" she thinks
My Poetry
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Running,
Circled by victims, -
The soldiers of the candy world, Weaponless, and all destined for death,
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A crumbling tombstome, lying mute in the green, A dedication of words can barely be seen,
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kaitttpfffdork on April 11I was just reading your page. Your music taste is fantastic. I'm gunna check out some of your poems too, I'm sure they'll be great too.
(:
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Decorus Somnium on August 17, 2007No problem, I liked your short poem with lots of emotions
And thanks for stopping by on my page. I was just reading yours too 
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Sweet As Sin on August 16, 2007why haven't you posted that beautiful poem yet?
ttyl
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LegoBrickLauren on August 13, 2007thanks for the comment. your poems are brilliant :] x
