Hello to anyone reading this. My name is Nicole (I'm also known as Nikki as you can see), and I live in Wiesbaden, Germany. I move around alot because of my dad's job, just in case you were wondering.
I've been writing poetry for a couple of years but recently began writing again after taking a two year break, so I may be a little rusty. Most of the poems that I have posted were written when I was 14 so comment on them if you want to but I'd much prefer if you gave my newer poetry alot of constructive critisism.
I can't think of much else to say about myself so...just read my poems if you want.
I've been writing poetry for a couple of years but recently began writing again after taking a two year break, so I may be a little rusty. Most of the poems that I have posted were written when I was 14 so comment on them if you want to but I'd much prefer if you gave my newer poetry alot of constructive critisism.
I can't think of much else to say about myself so...just read my poems if you want.
- Last seen on Nov 29 7:03 AM 2006. Member since November 24, 2004.
- I'm a lapisLazuli dream poet for 363 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "I'm not bad, I'm just drawn that way".
- I am a 16 year old girl (Germany)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a Student and Soccer player.
- I have 363 comments, 24 poems
My Poetry
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The densely populated drops of fog proceed to blanket my vision and cloak my body in a dreary humid cloud. The soft thump of my running feet reverberate back at
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Stillness wafts across the midnight green
as silence drifts like a phantom unseen. -
Scribbles on my paper,
so delicate, so fine,
Guest Book
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Parearoo on November 29, 2004I like your new poems!! They ROCK!! I would like to thank you again for all your comments on my poems, they mean a lot to me. you are awesome, keep up the great work!!
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Parearoo on November 27, 2004Hey Hawaiichic, I like Artemis Fowl too, although I haven't read the 3rd one yet. Did you know that if you click on the word edit that's near your name, you can change anything on your profile? That does include the place that tells if your a boy or a girl!! Anyways, thanx for all your comment on my poems and keep up the great work on yours.
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Willow on November 24, 2004Hawaiichic,
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~Willow~
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