Hey Everyone, Thanx for stopping by! Feel free to leave rediculously critical comments on anything, I prefer to fix things that don't work!
Not much to say except "be well, and have a great day or die tryin'"
Bye for now!
Not much to say except "be well, and have a great day or die tryin'"
Bye for now!
- Last seen on Jun 4 9:22 PM. Member since January 16, 2002.
- I'm a obsidian idea poet for 656 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is In a war against ones self, who wins?.
- I am a 27 year old girl (Canada)
- I have 656 comments, 2 contests
My Poetry
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Sitting here I can hear her golden moans
Like dulcit tones35 lines, 1 comment, June 19, 2004. In Erotica -
Never give up
Irredescent hope8 lines, 1 comment, January 23, 2004. In Personal -
Having a tickle fight with my little cousins.
Playing monster to their elephant. -
I rounded on him. I swallowed my disgust and revulsion. I turned and stood nose to nose with the giant of my nightmares.
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munchkin on November 3, 2005hey you remember me??? just checking to see if you still use this or not.. give me a shout..
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unlikely savior on July 15, 2005the sunshine rises over the peaks of the snowcapped mountains,
the morning dew sparkles on the fresh blooming spring flowers,
the haze of dawn burns away like the remnants of a bad dream.
through all this there is one focus on which my eyes never leave.
that is the all encompassing beauty that is you. -
mars on June 24, 2003Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my work. Guilt was written in a Malaysian form of writing called a pantoum. There is no set limit to the number of stanzas in a pantoum and it's not even required that you have a syllable count per line or rhyme. That was merely something I decided to do. The way the style works is that the first and the third line from your initial stanza will become the last and second line of your final stanza. The second and fourth lines from each stanza will become the first and third lines of the next stanza. It looks like this:
Line One
Line Two
Line Three
Line Four
Line Two Repeated
Line Five
Line Four Repeated
Line Six
Line Five Repeated
Line Seven
LIne Six Repeated
Line Eight
Line Seven Repeated
Line Three Repeated
Line Eight Repeated
Line One Repeated
I hope that helps you out and I look forward to reading your first attempt. And remember you're not limited to just four but four in most cases is the minimum.
Happy writing!
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Darianna on June 14, 2003Than que four let ting mean tear mother Poe hem!!! Eye ham great full two ewe four writ!!! Dairy an a x (sorry bout the message...I entered Silicas contest and I haven't been right since...lol)
