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*Je m'apelle BECCA*

Things that make me happy:
Fireworks, flowers, presents, volleyball, thunderstorms, sweatshirts, hammocks, laying on the beach, cool whip, snow days, curly fries, curly hair that goes boing boing, winning (heh), holidays, music, my friends

Things that make me sad:
When people cry-especially little babies, saying good-bye, when anybody else is sad

Things that piss me off:
Terrorism, fake people, people that have to be the center of attention all the time, excessively loud people, mean people, racism, my parents most of the time

Alright-enough of that, I'll cut to the chase: These are my poems-the good, the bad, and the ugly. Read and critique if ya like. I'd love to hear what any of you guys think about my writing or about the topics I write about. I'd definitely appreciate some insight, as I'm not a very experienced poet.
*I hope you like em, but if you dont thats okay too, cuz I didnt really write them with you in mind.

FYI: I think I've lost whatever rhyme I once had, so most of my recent stuff are just ramblings. If you're only gonna read one or two, I'd recommend one of the following: Crushes, Untitled II, Perfect, or Free. Those probably give the best representation of my writing style/my life.

AIM: sunshine3oo -- drop a line if ya want

**"If you can't be the poet, be the poem"**

Cheers!
Becca

  • Last seen on Jan 7 7:14 PM 2006. Member since October 20, 2002.
  • I'm a pyrite eye poet for 1096 comments.
  • My mood is , and quote is "Better to be pissed off than pissed on".
  • I am a 15 year old girl (USA)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm a Yankee fan.
  • I have 1,096 comments, 1 contest

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  • -MandA-BeaN- on November 10, 2004
    <3 i just commented in your xanga, and i have nothing to do right now so i commented here as well.
    i'll be 18 on sunday .... ahhhhhh!!!!! *scared look* haha.
    <3loveya
    manda
  • -MandA-BeaN- on October 31, 2004
    hey becca babe! i miss seeing you too :-[ about the pictures, though ... i'll keep that in mind when i get the rest of mine developed i can't think of any that i have of the 2 of you or anything, but if something comes up i'll let you know

    <3iloveyougirlie! --manda
  • A Dawn 07 on October 30, 2004
    ahem...yes it is...lol google freak...haha just kidding, i dont think they'll come back, he said the site was stupid so...i got mad at him for it, for saying that...oh well, yes you are right
    xo
    adn
  • -MandA-BeaN- on October 9, 2004
    <3 becccca, you're my favoritist! haha. uhmmmmm "we make party?" hahaha. yes yes, little german girls rock lol.
    toodles hun!
    --manda

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