NEVER take the great gift of life for granted you dont realize just how much it means until death stares you in the eyes so what... i have been through my share of life... i have seen more than what most can take credit for, i take it how it is, because thats the only way to take things. i take life with the thought that it might get better later. that just doesnt mean that it will... People are always telling me to smile,like smiling is going to take away all the hurt and the pain. Well I've tried that.I've tried hiding my sorrows, and covering the sadness in my smiles.And what I've learned is that when it hurts this much inside,it hurts to smile as well and your heart has a way of showing it,no matter how many masks you wear Guidelines for critiqueing my poetry.... i dont care what people think about my poetry. i find no reason to. its my emotion not theirs. so if your going to critique my genre, then leave now... otherwise i really dont care what you say as long as you make it constructive... not hurtful and annoyiing .
- Last seen on Feb 21 12:59 AM 2007. Member since November 26, 2003.
- I'm a supertopaz delight poet for 76 comments.
- I am a 18 year old girl (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a student.
- Visit my homepage at www.geocities.com/starrdust654/Welcome.html?1059611053780
- I have 76 comments
My Poetry
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Spider web backs, blotchy palms
Blue veins pulse and sometimes swell28 lines, August 25, 2005. In Dark -
Watch my words, so they dont copy
I would never want them to be me.
My Stories
Guest Book
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raynexpyre on June 26, 2005i comment on your author page too. i will coordinat my backroung and text....eventually. love ya too.
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help unwanted on May 18, 2005Hey...I live in MI too..
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dccrunner on March 10, 2004I suck becasue I haven't commented on your guestbook yet.
Moo, GOLDFISH, Death by broomstick, confusion.
Overall, I'm so glad I met you in gym Freshman year and that we found each other's poetry.
You're amazing whether you think so or not.
LOVE YOU
(oh and thank you for making me realize, even if it did/does piss me off)
I'll "try"
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Deathdealer on February 10, 2004Wow! Im the first one to comment! Hard to believe... anyway I guess it's kinda late to say welcome to the site. But nevertheless I just wanted to tell you that I like your style and you really have some great work here...
Nicely done.
