PLEASE CRITIQUE MY WORK!!!!!!!
there is much that could be said about me, but i doubt many people ever read the descriptions that are posted here... but just in case ill put a little something in...
my name is phoebe, i am obsessed with music and have EXTREMELY determined plans to become a high-energy alternative singer and a high-fashion model. if asked to describe myself, i would that i am a very outgoing perfectionist. my interests are scattered to practically everything from rotc and military obstacle courses {which i do rather often}, high-fashion and modeling, to music and movies, to sketching and reading.
to learn more about me in depth, you can read my poetry and/or send me messages.
.....and again, PLEASE CRITIQUE MY WORK!! criticism is not only welcomed, but is APPRECIATED. it doesnt matter if it is constructive or not really, as long as it gives a legitimate reason for an area of improvement. THANKS MAJOR!
there is much that could be said about me, but i doubt many people ever read the descriptions that are posted here... but just in case ill put a little something in...
my name is phoebe, i am obsessed with music and have EXTREMELY determined plans to become a high-energy alternative singer and a high-fashion model. if asked to describe myself, i would that i am a very outgoing perfectionist. my interests are scattered to practically everything from rotc and military obstacle courses {which i do rather often}, high-fashion and modeling, to music and movies, to sketching and reading.
to learn more about me in depth, you can read my poetry and/or send me messages.
.....and again, PLEASE CRITIQUE MY WORK!! criticism is not only welcomed, but is APPRECIATED. it doesnt matter if it is constructive or not really, as long as it gives a legitimate reason for an area of improvement. THANKS MAJOR!
- Last seen on Sep 7 4:01 PM. Member since March 8, 2005.
- I'm a peridot parrot poet for 35 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "PERFECTION is Impossible, MISTAKES are Unacceptable, DISAPPOINTMENT is Unbearable, therefore LIFE cannot Exist".
- I am a 17 year old girl from Oklahoma (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a student, singer, model, and restaurant hostess.
- Visit my homepage at myspace.com/MissHazardous
- I have 35 comments, 31 poems
My Poetry
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With everything that I hold dear
That isnt mine to hold -
Because I too have lived in doubt
That perfection could be real
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love turned violent on November 10, 2006Hello,
How are you?
I haven't heard from you in a while.
I was reading some of my old poetry
And how you kept saying you loved it and could relate.
It was good to come across.
I hope you're doing well. -
MissHazardous on June 30, 2006hey is this katie? umm... i dunno your last name but the one with the red hair that hangs out with tai and owen... yes i write! i think its shitty but yeah i write...
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Fain Extortion on June 27, 2006Wow, I know you.
I didn't know you wrote. -
Omen Ra My Love on June 11, 2006Hello Im from VF.Xx_Goddess_xX Love your poetry, you are awesome at it.
