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MissConceitedShow poetry

I can be loud,
I can be shy,
I can be conceited,
And that I will not deny.

I often wander in my mind.
I often question the reason why.
I often ponder the things I find.
I often get lost in a pool of lies.

I probably think too much,
And I probably evaluate too little.
If I looked confused and such,
I most likely am.
So please help me,
And grab my hand.

I tend to fall,
And the pieces of my heart shatter.
I tend to pretend to stand tall,
When I know if I pretend it won't matter.

I know I'm not perfect,
Maybe as close as I can be,
But maybe that's because,
That's just me.

  • Last seen on Nov 21 2:58 PM. Member since May 18, 2005.
  • I'm a aventurine thought poet for 59 comments.
  • My mood is , and quote is "Be yourself. Everyone else is taken.".
  • I am a 16 year old girl (United States)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm busy..
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  • Extreme Princess on June 26, 2006
    i like ur writing it is so filled with emotions from the heart but i just thought i would stop by and see what was going on keep up the good work and keep writing cause in any situation writing always comforts the soul...well 2 me it does. it helps me b at peace with myself..

    Pixie Fairy
  • Kayla001 on November 23, 2005
    Thank you so much for commenting my poem!
    I am new at writing poems, and I need all the help I can get.

    So Thankyou!
    Yea, I wasn't sure if the sentaces flowed that well together, but thanks! (i know, I couldn't have said that enough.)

    You are quite a good poet yourself.
  • Rotem06 on November 23, 2005
    thanks for commenting my poem
  • -Last in line- on May 28, 2005
    HEY HEY HEY! i lov ya! you stole my nick! lol..its ok...i dont mind lol! well miss you! bye! YEA! ur right best friends 4everz and everz!
    Edited on May 28, 9:28 because ''.

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