Just looking for some helpful critiques..
- Last seen on Jan 6 12:45 AM. Member since December 28, 2004.
- I'm a carnelian hope poet for 118 comments.
- I am a 18 year old girl (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a student.










- I have 118 comments, 4 contests, 51 poems
My Poetry
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“Color me a rainbow” she whispered quietly,
That misty afternoon in August.136 lines, 1 comment, December 5, 2005. In Love -
Variety between… 30 Joy Morgan
Paragraph Development 30 Period 247 lines, November 30, 2005. In Other
Guest Book
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GoddessonaSwing on December 14, 2005<3!!!! =) Love ya Joy-ey!
All my Love,
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AngelOfBetrayal on July 15, 2005um on your contest can it be as if your child is dead?cause my child is alive but it seems like she is dead cause i was only allowed to see her when she was born....oh and i love you poems...
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xXLoveXx on May 8, 2005i entered your contest and i absolutely adored it. having a contest for mother's day poems was great. i enjoyed it alot
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LunarKnight on May 7, 2005there... you should have a few more points now :-)
you have some good poems, too, btw.
