hi people,
I'm really not good at talking about myself so I'll just keep it short. My name is Mick, I'm 19 years old and I live in the Netherlands. My native language is Dutch but I prefere writing in English, and that's what I usually do. my writing style usually is pretty simple and it's always in free verse because I'm nowhere near skilled enough to write a good rhyme poem. apart from poetry I also write short stories and I try to keep a blog updated.
I like to get lots and lots of constructive critiques, so be nice and tell me what I'm doing wrong acording to you. I'll see if I can learn from it.
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proud AP brother of Anna (http://allpoetry.com/Genovefa)
- probably my favorite poet around here, generally right on target and never afraid to say what she's feeling... that's how more poets should be
I'm really not good at talking about myself so I'll just keep it short. My name is Mick, I'm 19 years old and I live in the Netherlands. My native language is Dutch but I prefere writing in English, and that's what I usually do. my writing style usually is pretty simple and it's always in free verse because I'm nowhere near skilled enough to write a good rhyme poem. apart from poetry I also write short stories and I try to keep a blog updated.
I like to get lots and lots of constructive critiques, so be nice and tell me what I'm doing wrong acording to you. I'll see if I can learn from it.
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proud AP brother of Anna (http://allpoetry.com/Genovefa)
- probably my favorite poet around here, generally right on target and never afraid to say what she's feeling... that's how more poets should be
- Last seen on Nov 28 10:29 AM. Member since June 15, 2006.
- I'm a amethyst understanding poet for 27 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "'life is what you make it'".
- I am a 19 year old guy (Netherlands)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a Student.
- I have 27 comments, 16 poems, 3 stories
My Poetry
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black and white are the perfect colors16 lines, 19 comments, January 5, 2007. In Personal
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they said I wasn't thinking
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Ik mis je
en ik wou dat ik je dat kon zeggen22 lines, 3 comments, September 22, 2006. In Sad -
wouldnt be any fun huh? it's a one liner for christ sake...3 lines, September 21, 2006. In Humor
My Stories
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Genovefa on September 12, 2006
Time zones are kinda complicated for me.Not to mention the sabotage they're making!
I want to talk to you.I miss our conversations.
No..I am sorry i had such an outburst.But i felt like maybe you could comfort me or give me some good advice.I am still pretty shuttered...So unsure of myself.You've been in trouble again though.
You better solve your problems over there,before you spend time helping me.
What is your dream?Once you told me that all you want is to be free.I want the same thing.I have other dreams too about my future.The bad thing is that everyone believes they depend on the coming exams.So much pressure on me..
Mick...thank you!Having you as a friend is one of life's bright sides.*hugs*
I dislike writing e-mails..I prefer telling you in person.Anyway,when can i find you online? -
Genovefa on September 11, 2006Where are you...Every time i came online with the hope to see you and every time i got dissapointed.I feel very bad right now..Well,how i feel is not the case but how i look.Lots of tears..
I don't know why i am so emotional.Too much coming on me i guess and i realise that i have not learned to fight,just to give up.I am such a pathetic coward.I am even afraid to commit suicide.stupid ha?And commit suicide why?Because i can't try?Who knows...Sometimes i can't face my life.Face the fact that everyone expects me to get to university or else i will be a loser,the fact that sometimes i see things are going badly but i feel unable to improve them,the fact that i don't even know who i am.And yeah..since i can't express who i am and what i want noone really listens.In my times of loneliness noone is around to fill the space,when i cry noone is there to hug me and tell me it's gonna be alright,when i smile noone is there to smile back.
I don't know what i expect.You to help me?You're probably too caught up in your life.And i don't blame you.Everyone focuses on their life.. -
Genovefa on September 5, 2006Wait...so that means 2pm for me?Works for this week!!But next week i will be returning home around 3pm and have studying to do..We'll see what we can do in the near future about that.
Aww
You're not online now..I wanted to talk to ya!I read the episodes 1 and 2 of your version of Startrek and i gotta tell you my comments.I loved them!How are you anyway?I am annoyed at the moment because someone stood me up but i'm trying to forget it.
Anna -
Genovefa on September 4, 2006
You got yourself in trouble again,ha?
lol Sure i'll put yim!But hey,is yim Yahoo Messanger?I think i already have that.My username is naniloa1234.I added you some seconds ago,if i am not mistaken,but you're probably not online.
It's monday...What a cursed day!I have a hell lot homework i need to do.You've started school right?
Kisses,
~Anna
