Good day to thee wearied traveller,
I started writing poetry probably around the time that my best mate, Lilynia did. She was going through some rough times that I would wish on no one and these had inspired her to write. Encouraged by that, I started to write too and yeah, you can see the results here!
Most of my poems follow some sort of story and most I wrote when inspired (usually just before I fall asleep) because of a particular emotion or event that was happening to me at the time that I couldn't express to anyone else (so my keyboard got the full brunt of my expressions )
I'd really appreciate any critical comments that anyone could give me on any of my writing.
Have a nice day xx
*People worth checking out:
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_Lilynia:_ A fantastic friend and an amazing poet. She certainly deserves some of her stuff publishing. She writes very inspirationally (she inspired me to start writing!!) and is always trying out new ideas so make sure you add her to her favourites!
allpoetry.com/poets/Lilynia
_deadalias:_ A fine poet who has summoned up the courage to tell the world about what she has been through the past few years. Please reward her by visiting some of her amazing poetry.
allpoetry.com/Poets/deadalias
_xstealingyoux:_ A fine poet with some brilliant works that make you think. Check 'em out.
allpoetry.com/Poets/xstealingyoux
_seremela:_ A brilliant young author exploring her new-found poetry skills. She usually has a fresh outlook on life that pretty much sums up what I'm thinking! She's also a great friend and I look on her as a second sister
allpoetry.com/poets/seremela
I started writing poetry probably around the time that my best mate, Lilynia did. She was going through some rough times that I would wish on no one and these had inspired her to write. Encouraged by that, I started to write too and yeah, you can see the results here!
Most of my poems follow some sort of story and most I wrote when inspired (usually just before I fall asleep) because of a particular emotion or event that was happening to me at the time that I couldn't express to anyone else (so my keyboard got the full brunt of my expressions )
I'd really appreciate any critical comments that anyone could give me on any of my writing.
Have a nice day xx
*People worth checking out:
*
_Lilynia:_ A fantastic friend and an amazing poet. She certainly deserves some of her stuff publishing. She writes very inspirationally (she inspired me to start writing!!) and is always trying out new ideas so make sure you add her to her favourites!
allpoetry.com/poets/Lilynia
_deadalias:_ A fine poet who has summoned up the courage to tell the world about what she has been through the past few years. Please reward her by visiting some of her amazing poetry.
allpoetry.com/Poets/deadalias
_xstealingyoux:_ A fine poet with some brilliant works that make you think. Check 'em out.
allpoetry.com/Poets/xstealingyoux
_seremela:_ A brilliant young author exploring her new-found poetry skills. She usually has a fresh outlook on life that pretty much sums up what I'm thinking! She's also a great friend and I look on her as a second sister
allpoetry.com/poets/seremela
- Last seen on Nov 8 7:38 AM. Member since July 27, 2005.
- I'm a carnelian hope poet for 127 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "Sleep is the best thing for being awake".
- I am a 18 year old girl (United Kingdom)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a student.
- Visit my homepage at www.freewebs.com/halffling
- I have 127 comments, 1 column, 31 poems, 1 philosophy
Poems I'm focused on
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Every path we choose
Will soon just cross one more
My Poetry
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There are some people in this life
Who you love, but lose17 lines, 1 comment, May 17, 2006. In Love -
I am not a 'decent man'
I don't wear a suit & tie11 lines, 2 comments, May 16, 2006. In Hope -
You fell an acorn
On my head
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Maerad on February 5, 2006We need to spend more time together
I loved it when you came to All Saints. Like I said, I'll let you know about this when we go to the Lakes Know when you break up yet? -
seremela on January 7, 2006hehe, everyones going to be like 'BOOBLE?! wtf?!'thanx for the comments, maerad!
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seremela on November 9, 2005oh my god! i don't even know what an AP mom/mum is and 2 people have requested it! lol! lmao! thank you for being so nice about my poems, i like yours too!lol
booble
ps so what IS an AP family? -
IamMEg on September 12, 2005Nice to meet you maerad; I have been writing since I could put pen to paper ... the words just spill and know not from where they come. Thank you for sharing your page. I look forward to persuing your creations!
