Back with a vengence and writing so fast there's smoke coming out of the keyboard.
Still as random as I was before, and still writing about the same sort of things...
But life is different now. Better. I got new medication which works better so I'm in a mostly better mood; I'm totally over my ex who was making life hard for me; and I got a new fish (that's the most important bit
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This is my favourite poem ever.
Havisham
Beloved, sweetheart, bastard. Not a day since then
I haven't wished him dead. Prayed for it
so hard I've dark green pebbles for eyes,
Ropes on the back of my hands I could strangle with.
Spinster. I stink and remember. Whole days
in bed cawing Nooooo at the wall; the dress
yellowing; trembling if I open the wardrobe;
The slewed mirror, full length, her, myself, who did this
to me? Puce curses that are sounds not words.
Some nights ar better, the lost body over me,
my fluent tongue in its mouth or ear
Then down till I suddenly bite awake. Love's
hate behind a white veil; a red balloon bursting
In my face. Bang. I stabbed at a wedding cake.
Give me a male corpse for a long slow honeymoon.
Don't think it's only the heart that b-b-b-breaks.
Carol Ann Duffy
Much love to Leper Messiah if he gets his sorry ass on here again. Plans for destroying the Atlantic are in progress. Muah ha ha ha!
My old style of poetry is free verse, but I've recently started writing non-romantic sonnets which I really enjoy.
I hope you enjoy. Please PM me, I love meeting new people even if I don't end up close to them, and I need all the criticism I can get so I can improve. It's all about life experience people
Still as random as I was before, and still writing about the same sort of things...
But life is different now. Better. I got new medication which works better so I'm in a mostly better mood; I'm totally over my ex who was making life hard for me; and I got a new fish (that's the most important bit
)This is my favourite poem ever.
Havisham
Beloved, sweetheart, bastard. Not a day since then
I haven't wished him dead. Prayed for it
so hard I've dark green pebbles for eyes,
Ropes on the back of my hands I could strangle with.
Spinster. I stink and remember. Whole days
in bed cawing Nooooo at the wall; the dress
yellowing; trembling if I open the wardrobe;
The slewed mirror, full length, her, myself, who did this
to me? Puce curses that are sounds not words.
Some nights ar better, the lost body over me,
my fluent tongue in its mouth or ear
Then down till I suddenly bite awake. Love's
hate behind a white veil; a red balloon bursting
In my face. Bang. I stabbed at a wedding cake.
Give me a male corpse for a long slow honeymoon.
Don't think it's only the heart that b-b-b-breaks.
Carol Ann Duffy
Much love to Leper Messiah if he gets his sorry ass on here again. Plans for destroying the Atlantic are in progress. Muah ha ha ha!
My old style of poetry is free verse, but I've recently started writing non-romantic sonnets which I really enjoy.
I hope you enjoy. Please PM me, I love meeting new people even if I don't end up close to them, and I need all the criticism I can get so I can improve. It's all about life experience people
- Last seen on Mar 23 12:49 PM 2007. Member since February 12, 2005.
- I'm a diamond love poet for 211 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "Never regret anything that made you smile".
- I am a girl (England)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a skint student.
- I have 211 comments, 1 contest, 27 poems, 5 stories
My Poetry
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I know you can't see the little boy crying.
See him crying amid the endless rows18 lines, 4 comments, March 26, 2006. In Personal
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344 lines, May 15, 2006. In <600 words, Unedited
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There is no sound other than the tap, tapping of booted footsteps on the cracked tarmac . The occasional car rushes past where there is light. No light shines down here.
Ta343 lines, 5 comments, January 7, 2006. In <200 lines, Other -
Pupils, thought professor Jakemere, should be noisy, have bad habits, be insulting and rude. Pupils should hate the teachers and yawn loudly in lessons, fight when they thought
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Kithnec on May 17, 2006No-ones wrote on her in a bit so ill write sum@...umm....how u doin? nd r u enjoyin ur study leave? lol im off scool AGAIN lol ne hu...take care nd gud look wiv ur exams...keep in touch wiv me or ill find u nd hand cuff u 2 a lamp post last at nite mwhahahahahahaha ttyl XXX ~Kithnec~
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Leper Messiah on July 1, 2005hey sorry we havnt talked today, i think i ahve a virus, but plz wait for me, ill get it fixed asap, so wait k? love ya
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-amykins- on June 30, 2005Hi I'm back, once again leaving my mark on your guestbook. I've just seen on a chain letter than your birthday is 25th July, same as my sister's. I thought I'd inform you of that random fact lol. You haven't written anything in a while is everything ok? 'Coz you haven't really been online very much either. But you did comment on my new poem yesterday (thankyou by the way lol) but I miss you darl! I hope life is good, and you're looking forward to your summer hols- fuck it's thundering here and I nearly shit myself just then lol it was really loud. My nose is now un-pierced coz Duncan twiddled the stud and it got infected, so I'm letting it heal thengetting it done again lol. Never mind. It's all part of our learning path. God I'm feeling random. You know what this is a very long thing to be writing on a guestbook, so I'm going to go now, but IM me next time you're online darl ok? Love you! *hugs* - get your ass through Bish soon ok? lol
Amy xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx *mwah*
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Aedara-Wren on June 12, 2005Ok, worked it out now, you're a lady!!lol!!that sounds rude but theres no way of telling from your name!!
Dara
