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LynnJonesShow poetry

I write about a variety of different things.
It really depends on the mood I'm in.
So I really think that you should just check it out.
Maybe comment a little.
I really like criticism.
It's my motivation to do better.

Also...

My best friend is on this site.
Her name is NicoleAlyce.
She is a much better writer than myself.
She's the one who actually introduced me to this site.
I was originally on poetry.com.
But it really sucks.
So anyways, check out NicoleAlyce.

One more thing...

I love to read other people's poems.
So if you want someone to really look at your poem and give out some good criticism.
Just let me know.
I would be more than happy to help.

Have a great day!

  • Last seen on Jul 10 11:36 PM. Member since October 11, 2005.
  • I'm a malachite opening poet for 399 comments.
  • My mood is , and quote is You are truly amazing.
  • I am a 20 year old girl (United States)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm a student.
  • I have 399 comments, 2 contests

My Poetry

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  • Before I end up six feet under and upside down.
    13 lines, 3 comments, June 12. In Sad, Personal
  • Pretty girl
    Just wants to feel
    Anything at all
    22 lines, 5 comments, June 12. In Thoughts
  • It’s to kiss someone and
    Leave them wanting more
    14 lines, 2 comments, June 12. In Thoughts, Love
  • She stood there with a blank expression
    Her tiny hands softly clutching her round belly
    22 lines, 11 comments, June 9. In Sad

My Stories

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Visitor Book

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  • The-Choke on June 15
    Hey, I found your page and I was reading some of the things you've written(Which I like so far) and I saw that you said you like to read other people's writings and give them criticism. If you're at all interested I would love to have you read some of my stuff and let me know what you think. Thanks
  • NicoleAlyce on April 13, 2006
    I will always be there for you. Always. To the very best of my ablities. I had to write the poem. I was angry for you, for me, for every time a nice girl gets hurt. I love u too my little snufflepuff. Goodnight for now.
  • NicoleAlyce on April 13, 2006
    I frickin love the crap outta you my little sparkle ball shooting star princess. <3

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