Luz Aradia
~the poetic voice of Amy Meneses~
I would like to thank you for taking the time to come and read some of my poetry, it is greatly appreciated. I often write experimentally and add hidden messages and/or make formatting that is just as poetic as my words. Please take any criticism I may write as something I think may help you and something that is simply my opinion. I do not ever go on to assume that I can write any poem better than anyone else and/or that I am a better poet than anyone else. I have taken a lot of poetry classes and workshops and learned some great techniques that helped me, I simply try and pass on that valuable information on to other poets. I would also appreciate the same; if you find anything you think I need to work on, please do not feel like you will hurt my feelings. I want to continue to grow as a poet and will appreciate any feedback. The I just ask if you would please not comment on my poem to tell me that I have misspellings when I do that on purpose or telling me that my "i"s should be capital when in fact I sometimes do this on purpose as well. I simply ask for an open mind. Instead, I would appreciate feedback like, "the lowercase "i"s you use do not work so well in my opinion because..." As I said before, I would appreciate any CONSTRUCTIVE criticism that would help me and isn't biased.
My Recent Writes
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Turmoil and chaos through beckoning eyes
Through conflict and turmoil and blatant disguise16 lines, 4 comments, June 12 -
Her ivory skin hid the truth
And golden hair sealed the deal.23 lines, 23 comments, March 13. In Society -
Death sweeps eternally through empty souls
watching the BREAK of simple hearts30 lines, 6 comments, February 19. In Workshop Poem
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