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Hey all, my name's Sam and i love writing poetry ! i'm pretty creative i think when it comes to new topics. though most of them were about love in the beginning, i think, along with my style, my poetry has really changed over the past couple of months !

A few things about me...
1. I lovelovelove to cook ! i'm going to a culinary school, which is a great way for me to get my career started. I plan on going to Johnson and Wales, or some great culinary college :] That's why i used the railroad tracks to symbolize me moving on in my life.
2. Obviously i love to write, stories and poetry both.
3. I draw pretty well...
4. I'm really modest. I won't talk about how awesome i am and how well i can do things. I talk more about how someone else can do things well. I'm more of a confidence booster for others instead of myself... xD
5. My favorite type of music is rock. i like some metal and country, but mostly rock xD My favorite band is Panic At The Disco <3
6. I've had trouble with self-esteem a lot...
7. I'm really friendly, outgoing, and just your everyday weirdo I love making new friends and love hearing about your interests, especially if they're similar to mine.
8. I'm a book nerd :]
9. I'm an animal lover, a tree hugger, and a peace promoter :]


My name is Chris
I am three,
My eyes are swollen
I cannot see,
I must be stupid
I must be bad,
What else could have made
My daddy so mad?
I wish I were better
I wish I weren't ugly,
Then maybe my mommy
Would still want to hug me.
I cant do a wrong
I cant speak at all
Or else I'm locked up
All day long.
When I'm awake I'm all alone
The house is dark
My folks aren't home
When my mommy does come home
I'll try and be nice,
So maybe ill just get
One whipping tonight.
I just heard a car
My daddy is back
From Charlie's bar.
I hear him curse
My name is called
I press myself
Against the wall
I try to hide
From his evil eyes
I'm so afraid now
I starting to cry
He finds me weeping
Calls me ugly words,
He says its my fault
He suffers at work.
He slaps and hits me
And yells at me more,
I finally get free
And run to the door
Hes already locked it
And I start to bawl,
He takes me and throws me
Against the hard wall
I fall to the floor
With my bones nearly broken,
And my daddy continues
With more bad words spoken,
"I'm sorry!", I scream
But its now much to late
His face has been twisted
Into a unimaginable shape
The hurt and the pain
Again and again
O please God, have mercy!
O please let it end!
And he finally stops
And heads for the door
While i lay there motionless
Brawled on the floor
My name is Chris
I am three,
Tonight my daddy
Murdered me
And you can help
Sickens me top the soul,
And if you read this
and don't pass it on
I pray for your forgiveness
Because you would have to be
One heartless person
To not be effected
By this Poem
And because your effected,
Do something about it!
So all I ask you to do
Is pass this on!
IF YOU ARE AGAINST CHILD ABUSE!



Feel free to talk- i'm on every day... lol Feel free to give me constructive criticism- i've gotten better by getting it. Don't feel bad if you feel like bashing me over a piece of my work, i'll understand xD

Btw- my screen name used to be LuvHobbes6, if anyone's wondering xD

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  • mizerdrea on August 30
    hi..

    remember me?
    nice name...^^
    nice to meet you...

  • Deleted on August 17
    i gave u the group because i am not doing anything with it..... and i am 0 years old... 4 the record
  • DeSiBoO14 on August 12
    HeY!!cHeCk OuT dA nEw PoEmS!!
  • PanicInSeconds on August 11
    what about hobos ?... my screen name do you mean ?

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