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Written by (my bestest friend) Viktoreja Rose

Her Song

She wakes in the 'noon
spent the night crying.
Her roommate yells,
she thinks about dying.

She has no car-
just a pretty mouth for talking.
Her feet are tired,
from all the walking.

**No one understands her; but I sure do,
somehow I know, she'll make it through.
We share the same soul, just not the same heart,
her broken wings mended with spare parts.

Her boyfriend loves her,
but he's broken too.
They wander in the rain-
wond'ring what to do.

I watch them both
from the dry of my car,
her eyes are tearing
how'd she make it this far?

**No one understands her; but I sure do,
somehow I know, she'll make it through.
We share the same soul, just not the same heart,
her broken wings mended with spare parts.

She never had a home
moved from place to place.
Blessed with nearly nothing
but a pretty face.

She cries at night
Hold it in, in the day.
A pretty porcelain doll
who will find her way.

**No one understands her; but I sure do,
somehow I know, she'll make it through.
We share the same soul, just not the same heart,
her broken wings mended with spare parts.

She fights against
the wind and rain
She wipes her tears
She'll never be the same.
She's in a world
she can't control.
Some day she knows,
she will be whole.

**No one understands her; but I sure do!
Somehow I know, she'll make it through.
We share the same soul, just not the same heart,
her broken wings mended with spare parts.

Oh one day,
one day,
She'll be whole!
Someday,
someday,
she will know...

She knows I love her,
and her boyfriend does too,
Someday she'll real'ize this
and know what to do...
"Moon and Back"- Savage Garden



She's taking her time making up the reasons
To justify all the hurt inside
Guess she knows from the smiles
and the look in their eyes
Everyone's got a theory 'bout the bitter one.

They're saying,
"Mamma never loved that much"
And "Daddy never keeps in touch
That's why she shies away from human affection"

But somewhere in a private place
She packs her bags for outer space
And now she's waiting for the right
kind of pilot to come


And she'll say to him

I would fly to the moon and back
if you'll be...
If you'll be my baby
Got a ticket for a world where we belong
So would you be my baby?


She can't remember a time when she felt needed
If love was red then she was color blind
All her friends they've been tried for treason
And crimes that wer never defined


She's saying, "Love is like a barren place
And reaching out for human faith
Is like a journey I just don't have a map for"

So baby's gonna take a dive
and Push the shift to overdrive
Send a signal that she's hanging
All her hopes on the stars

What a pleasant dream


I would fly to the moon and back
if you'll be...
If you'll be my baby
Got a ticket for a world where we belong

So would you be my baby?





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"Lifetime" by Beth Hart

She got a lover's soul
She got her radio
She got her memories, her extremities
She's driving must too fast
She wants to make it last
She wrote a song for you
She calls it black and blue

Aint no way to live a lifetime
Aint no way to live at all
Aint no way to live a lifetime
It just aint no way, darling
to live at all

She's sick of being late
She knows she's second rate
She wonders if you'll staying
and love her anyways
She's crawling back again
It's such a bitter end
She knows she don't belong
She screams a children's song

Aint no way to live a lifetime
Aint no way to live at all
Aint no way to live a lifetime
It just aint no way, darling
to live at all

And the sun dont shine my way
And the moon dont make me dance
If you're listening, here me pray
I give my hands for just a second chance
My plea is not in vain

She lost her lover's soul
She lost her radio
She got her memories, her extremities
Just let that bad man go
She's sweating in the snow
No one to call her own
Dont call the truth ain't home

Aint no way to live a lifetime
Aint no way to live at all
Aint no way to live a lifetime
It just aint no way, darling
to live at all

It just aint no way to live at all...

all alone...

  • Last seen on Jun 20 8:47 PM. Member since October 2, 2004.
  • I'm a carnelian hope poet for 106 comments.
  • My mood is , and quote is "Full Is Not Heavy As Empty, Not Nearly - F. Apple".
  • I am a 24 year old girl (United States)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm a n aide for the mentally retarded.
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  • I am in the groups Used and Abused
  • I have 106 comments, 34 poems, 2 stories

My Poetry

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    38 lines, 3 comments, June 20
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    Warmth barely penetrating
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    41 lines, 1 comment, February 7, 2006. In Other
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My Stories

  • Jade and jaded. Green and youthful. Two sets of eyes met. Mine and hers. She was seven years old, but her one million “ why”s were much more profound than expected. “Why”’s bey
    622 lines, 1 comment, June 14, 2005. In <200 lines, Inspirational
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    411 lines, 6 comments, October 4, 2004. In <200 lines, Inspirational, Romance

Guest Book

1 - 4 of 4
  • LovelornAbandon on May 23, 2005
    On the poem that I read about the bf sitch...you might want to read Genuine Penitence..that's my version..
  • Fade From Memory on May 23, 2005
    Hey thanks for reading through my poetry and leaving your comments. It was much appreciated. I read more of your poems and I'd have to say they're quite impressive. I love the themes of your poems and the different views and perspectives of various topics. I find it amazing how well you can rhyme in your poetry without it sounding cheesey. How do you do that? That is something I wish I had the talent for. As for your most recent poem, Conquer, I think the ending sounds just fine. I wouldn't know how you would want to make it better, since it is your thoughts and feelings. Oh by the way, I hope you and your friend made up and stuff. you two seem to live very different lives.
  • Victoria Lynn on November 16, 2004
    BTW... BADGER BADGER BADGER!
  • Victoria Lynn on November 16, 2004
    Swoosh?
    Swoosh.

    Whooooooooooooooooooosh!

    You rock!

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