Please give me useful crit, that's the only reason I'm here really, I will try to return the favour as often as I can.
I won't be offended if you hate something I wrote, but I would appreciate at least an attempt to explain why you do/don't like something.
If you don't know how to crit in a valuable way, or if you are here just to get points (shame on you!), PLEASE read any/all of the following:
allpoetry.com/Column/2047829
allpoetry.com/Column/1465936
allpoetry.com/Column/446864
allpoetry.com/Column/284503
allpoetry.com/Column/192994
allpoetry.com/Column/185575
Please don't leave me "Wow, that was great, keep penning, you are the best, I love your work" messages just to claim the points.
Cheers,
LB
I won't be offended if you hate something I wrote, but I would appreciate at least an attempt to explain why you do/don't like something.
If you don't know how to crit in a valuable way, or if you are here just to get points (shame on you!), PLEASE read any/all of the following:
allpoetry.com/Column/2047829
allpoetry.com/Column/1465936
allpoetry.com/Column/446864
allpoetry.com/Column/284503
allpoetry.com/Column/192994
allpoetry.com/Column/185575
Please don't leave me "Wow, that was great, keep penning, you are the best, I love your work" messages just to claim the points.
Cheers,
LB
- Last seen on Jan 10 5:09 AM. Member since October 31, 2005.
- I'm a opaline dream poet for 973 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "These boots were made for lovin'".
- I am a 29 year old woman (Great Britain)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a bibliophile.
- I am in the groups A HowtoGiveConstructiveCriticism Group, The Commenting Community
- I have 973 comments, 33 poems
My Poetry
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peace will never dull the passion
in our poppy-field lives -
In those brief and hidden gestures
Underneath your calm disguise
I witness raging battles -
Lick lace and leather up long legs to lingerie,
Own me. Openly opress me and I will obey.
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In those brief and hidden gestures / Underneath your calm disguise / I witness raging battles / Forging sadness in your eyes / / Amongst the pain and turmoil / and deep uncertainty / Camouflage and safety lie / where you confide in me
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Symphony : Hallo! on June 4, 2008hallo LB, Im not sure will you remember me as it's been a year since I last logged on - but I hope you are well and still writing daily [unlike myself] - take care - symphony!
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Shorty Ray : Loveboots... on April 7, 2007Why Loveboots, I finally come back to find you haven't been around since 03/19. I love your new pieces. Lovely.
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Frodofan on February 16, 2007I am inviting you to participate in The Random Rounds. For more information, click here: http://allpoetry.com/group/show/The%20Random%20Rounds
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Kiglorion on September 5, 2006for you boots..i started writing something in the same way you did, about the "loveboots" name. here is just a piece....lol
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sexy black boots,
worn up to the knees,
with a five inch heel.
a black leather tease!
give me a little time, and i will post it.
