LostSoulOfRage

hi everyone.
i havent written any poetry in a while, im mostly working on stories.
their posted on storywrite if you would like to read them.
ive been writing since i was about 8, i usually wrote short stories, but i just started writing poetry about 3 yrs ago and i would like to know what you think of it.
i have just started showing my poetry to people, so please dont hesitate to tell me you hate it.
thanks for taking thhe time to read my poems!

Last seen on Nov 3 11:59 PM 2008. Member since June 16, 2006.
I'm a aventurine thought poet for 48 comments.
My mood is , and quote is "ill b me n ull b u but lets meet n the middle ok?".
I am a 16 year old girl (United States)
When I'm not writing, I'm a student.
Visit my homepage at www.myspace.com/kara_lvz_him_much
I have 48 comments, 27 poems

My Poetry

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Living in a World of Make-Believe

You always sheltered him from the world,
Never caring that he wasn't being prepared.

20 lines, September 11, 2007
No More Dark

dark clouds blocking the sky, / no time to be weak, no time to be strong. / no time for last minute requests, no time for the last words. / just know ur up there looking down, smiling up above.

35 lines, May 30, 2007
I never thought it could end this way

I never thought it would end like this,
I never thought it could.

41 lines, 1 comment, October 14, 2006. In Other
Mistakes, examples, what is there to live by?

Everyone tells me to look up to someone, but if I have no one to look up to do I look down?
Am I my own example?

17 lines, September 6, 2006. In Other