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- A 18 year old guy from Washington, United States
- Visit my homepage at www.myspace.com/carnagebyninja
- When I'm not writing, I'm playing guitar, livin life!
- My motto is: chill
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"I LOVE THIS SITE!
Poetry rocks, and so do all you peeps writing it!"
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Why should I take this life seriously? It will be over all too soon anyways!
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Left in Shattered Pieces:
Her voice skips
like a broken record,
the soft "I love you"
all over again.
Memories molding his dreams
in this sleepless eternity.
The past becomes
as clear as her voice
her soft "I love you"
over again.
So he grasps love once more
dusting away the grime,
but all the sorrow in the world
won't fill in these gaps.
Tossing away troubles;
letting love go,
Leaves only his regrets,
and love lies in pieces
on the floor.
He cries alone, as
her voice skips
like a broken record.
"I love you"
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"I LOVE THIS SITE!
Poetry rocks, and so do all you peeps writing it!"
******************************************************************************************************************
Why should I take this life seriously? It will be over all too soon anyways!
******************************************************************************************************************
Left in Shattered Pieces:
Her voice skips
like a broken record,
the soft "I love you"
all over again.
Memories molding his dreams
in this sleepless eternity.
The past becomes
as clear as her voice
her soft "I love you"
over again.
So he grasps love once more
dusting away the grime,
but all the sorrow in the world
won't fill in these gaps.
Tossing away troubles;
letting love go,
Leaves only his regrets,
and love lies in pieces
on the floor.
He cries alone, as
her voice skips
like a broken record.
"I love you"
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Guest Book
- Wow, nice page you got here ^^
- love given or love taken is never lost. once you've loved someone the love is always there, even when there gone. love is the only thing that endures. mountins are torn down built up, torn done again over milions and millions of years.seas dry up. deaserts give way to new seas . time crumbles ever building men erects. great ideas are proven wrong and callapse as surely as castles and temples. but love is a force, an energy a power. at risk of sounding like a hallmark card, i think love is like a ray of sunshine, traveling for all eternity through space, deeper and deeper into infinity ; like that ray of light, it never ceases to exist. love endures. it's i binding forse in the universe, like the energy withen a molecule is a binding force. without thecohesive energy in a molecule, without gravity, without love-chaos. we exist to love and be loved, because loveseems to be the only thing that brings order and meaning and light to existence. it must be true because if it isn't true- God help us.
hey babe
its ashley,
your an amaizing artistMeow?
Wow, I'm still on this site! =D Keep up the amazing work. You really have the gift for poetry.- I want dibs on my rokc'n'roll cloud
~hunts you down for my cloud~ - See all
on Mar 18 2009 08:07 AM
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