Most of my poetry is realistic and deep. I write mainly about life and things that have happened to me. I consider myself a deep thinker and I believe that it shows in my poetry. Imagery and flow means alot to me, and I like for my poetry to tell a story. Most of my writes will be about things that I have been through; when I was raped, or my rapist. My family issues, or other things that I may be dealing with. The other stuff that I may write about are probably going to be things that no one gives much thought to, or fiction/fantasy.
TO JERRY
I will fight you til the day I die,
You'll never take away my will to survive
I will overcome what you have done to me
And at last I will live in peace.
- Last seen on May 7 9:02 PM 2008. Member since November 14, 2004.
- I'm a citrine experience poet for 171 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "The greatest game I ever played was the one I lost".
- I am a 20 year old girl (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a writer/singer/musician.
- Visit my homepage at www.myspace.com/hardcorerockette
- I have 171 comments, 1 contest, 23 poems
My Poetry
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Drown me in your salty ocean
Save me from my screams -
The air smells like death
I don't know how I got here
But I’m beginning to choke on regret -
Flithy heart and finger nails
Another day her God fails
Cigarettes and incense -
AGRESSION is an OBSESSION
I'm feining with a desire43 lines, 3 comments, November 14, 2006. In Angst
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Silent Poetess on January 3, 2006Thanks for the comment on my poem. ^^; How would you suggest I tweak the last stanza, by the way?
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X- Kitten -X on June 24, 2005just to let you know, iridescent-dreamer is now 'X- Kitten -X'
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Sarah S on June 15, 2005Thank you for the comment, I have read some of your poems as well. I just didn't know which one to comment on. Anyway, you are a very good writer and I hope to read more.
Sarah -
Amanda L Alford on May 30, 2005Hey Lyla!!!
Love ya lots! Love your work! You kick ass!!
Go Crazy C.!!!!
