Hey,
I'm Loki. A 25 year old from Alabama. I've been writing since I was about 13 and still write to this day. I enjoy writing my feelings and challenging my readers. I've never really been fond of my work, but am becoming more fond of it lately. I've recently been inspired to write again and to challenge myself in my writing and my life, by a very important person to me.
Let me know if you have any questions and or comments about my work. I'm open to criticism be it good or bad. Thanks and I hope you enjoy.
People who are important to me:
Bean Sidhe: She'll paint you a masterpiece with words and then tear it in two. Her words will make you cry, they will stop your heart, they will slow your breathing, and they will make you stand up and shout obscenities. Not to mention she is my eternal beloved. She is my inspiration and my editor. All praise for my work belongs to her.
DaemonFaery: (AKA My Evil Little Pony) aside from being my occasional accomplice, she is an amazing poet and (sometimes) daughter.
Patpowersnoshoepoet: Far and away a great poet and an even greater commenter. He's an awesome friend.
since feeling is first
since feeling is first
who pays any attention
to the syntax of things
will never wholly kiss you;
wholly to be a fool
while Spring is in the world
my blood approves,
and kisses are a better fate
than wisdom
lady i swear by all flowers. Don't cry
- the best gesture of my brain is less than
your eyelids' flutter which says
we are for each other; then
laugh, leaning back in my arms
for life's not a paragraph
And death i think is no parenthesis
e. e. cummings
And a lonesome muted stripling with a rapt remedial gaze.
The poverty of his language and the wealth of his emotion
Bring him endless murky musings and unexpected frustration
Angst and madness weave the fabric of his life.
Tomorrow might be better but right now it feels like
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There's a panther wild and proud behind the doors of a redolent cage,
And an underdeveloped intellect filled with impotent and static rage.
And don't think you're exempt if you earn good weekly wages,
'Cause you're neighbor's going crazy and insanity's contagious.
I know there's so much you want to say
But your tongue gets in the way and sometimes it feels like
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I know there's so much you want to say
And the tumbrel of your mind gets in the way.
It's the same for everybody to degrees.
We all get that foggy freeze and sometimes it feels like
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"Sometimes It Feels Like...*?!%+!*"
BAD RELIGION
"They say there's a place free of trouble and care, but you have to pass a test for to make it there. It has something to do with the road that's straight and narrow and the only way to go it is by being broad and thorough."
"You can play by the rules, or bend them to your needs
But the test isn't over 'til you've reached your dark eternal sleep
There are no absolutes, no big wheels in the sky
You don't have to be first, you just gotta somehow get by"
"Tested"
Greg Graffin
- Last seen 5 hours ago. Member since July 25, 2007.
- I'm a obsidian idea poet for 565 comments.
- My mood is
, and quote is One too many.. - I am a 25 year old man from Alabama (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm fixing computers.
- I support the site as a gold member
- I have 565 comments, 11 contests, 1 column
My Lists
Poems I'm focused on
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Time wilts when you're not near.
The petals, though overplayed26 lines, 2 comments, September 6 -
Just a few more minutes to make
a frame in which to display22 lines, 3 comments, August 15 -
When I realized just what I was doing, I had to stop and catch my breath.32 lines, 2 comments, July 1
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How many romantic words, whispered upon a midnight's pillow26 lines, 1 comment, June 24
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The vibrant yellow lights diminish me as I become one with the gravel.21 lines, 1 comment, June 22
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On the day that I first met
my distraught angel on high23 lines, 7 comments, June 22 -
Beyond the purple sunset, narrow your eyes to the great divine.13 lines, 4 comments, June 19
Active Contests
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Write about work. I want entries about how hard a worker you are or how lazy/ignorant your employees/coworkers are.850 points, ended October 3, 3 entries
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Anti-wordbank. Write a poem WITHOUT using these words.
My Poetry
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Dawn creeps like a familiar foe
and wakes me hours before I should be,31 lines, October 6 -
At the end of a gleaming field
of asphalt and reflective yellow paint,13 lines, 1 comment, October 5
My other items
- Column: Think before you type. at allpoetry
Some people are jack asses. doesn't mean the rest of the world has to be.
This one's for you Jim!
Visitor Book
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XxVampirePoetxX on September 30love the page
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Ephiphany : Hi, I was just scrolling thru the list and your name caught my eye on July 11very interesting, and odd. I'm from Alabama as well, been on AP since Jan. 2007.
Well, just wanted to say hi to another Alabamian Poet.
Ephiphany
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Gods Lil Warrior on June 24I love your poetry.
Sorry I have not commented on them.
They have just left me speechless. -
xixlovexjustinx : nothing *big smile* on June 20nice page maybe we can talk some time...hope you like here
