I write about how I feel or whatever running through my head. I have no idea how I think of some of the things I have written but sometimes my random thoughts come together nicely. I am inspired by so many things if only I had time to write everything I wanted to. Poems are always dancing in my head. I am an 18 year old so I have alot more to learn in life. Id appreciate if you would comment on my works and I always do my best to return the favor. Thanx so much also check out these people....
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-broken dreams-
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shurlz00
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relentlesslove
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Love can be the best and worst feeling in the world, appreciate it while u have it, and when your hurting turn to God and realize he/she wasnt the one and something even greater is on its way!
My fave song:
Holes in the Floor of Heaven
One day shy of eight years old
Grandma passed away
I was a broken hearted little boy,
blowing out that birthday cake
How I cried when the sky let go
with a cold and lonesome rain
Momma smiled said don't be sad child
Grandma's watchin you today
'Cause there's holes in the floor of Heaven
and her tears are pourin' down
that's how you know she's watchin'
wishin' she could be here now
And sometimes if you're lonely
just remember she can see
there's holes in the floor of Heaven
and she's watchin' over you and me
Seasons come and seasons go
nothin' stays the same
I grew up fell in love
met a girl who took my name
Year by year we made a life
in this sleepy little town
I thought we'd grow old together
Lord I sure do miss her now
But there's holes in the floor of Heaven
and her tears are pourin' down
that's how you know she's watchin'
wishin' she could be here now
and sometimes when I'm lonely
I remember she can see
there's holes in the floor of Heaven
and she's watchin' over you and me
Well my little girl is 23
I walk her down the aisle
it's a shame her mom can't be here now
to see her lovely smile
They throw the rice
I catch her eye
as the rain starts comin' down
she takes my hand says daddy don't be sad 'cause
I know momma's watchin' now
And there's holes in the floor of Heaven
and her tears are pourin down
that's how you know she's watchin'
wishin' she could be here now
and sometimes when I'm lonely
I remember she can see
there's holes in the floor of Heaven
and she's watchin' over you and me
Watchin' over you and me
Watchin' over you and me
Watchin' over you and me
RIP Marietta Rankin
There is nothing more comforting than a blanket of faith!
Thanx 2 all the amazing people in my life.
j89
playerofthekeys
emo4ever
destin2b
wordsofwisdom
davesadler4
xxgothicarcangelxx
nluv4ever
-broken dreams-
oxbeautifuldisaster
sweets15
wickedjuggalo69
shurlz00
untilXyouXfadeX
relentlesslove
dreaminoflife-mom
hot tamale- aunt tammy
flamingfire- lil sis
bballbaby8-lil sis
she-devil-cousin
hoosierlady
justin
curve ball
igodina
ken77
forbidden to bleed
puppydog
trublu, myron- haikus
bree
the liberal poet
homesick
Chris Robin
sandygram
Pozo
Love can be the best and worst feeling in the world, appreciate it while u have it, and when your hurting turn to God and realize he/she wasnt the one and something even greater is on its way!
My fave song:
Holes in the Floor of Heaven
One day shy of eight years old
Grandma passed away
I was a broken hearted little boy,
blowing out that birthday cake
How I cried when the sky let go
with a cold and lonesome rain
Momma smiled said don't be sad child
Grandma's watchin you today
'Cause there's holes in the floor of Heaven
and her tears are pourin' down
that's how you know she's watchin'
wishin' she could be here now
And sometimes if you're lonely
just remember she can see
there's holes in the floor of Heaven
and she's watchin' over you and me
Seasons come and seasons go
nothin' stays the same
I grew up fell in love
met a girl who took my name
Year by year we made a life
in this sleepy little town
I thought we'd grow old together
Lord I sure do miss her now
But there's holes in the floor of Heaven
and her tears are pourin' down
that's how you know she's watchin'
wishin' she could be here now
and sometimes when I'm lonely
I remember she can see
there's holes in the floor of Heaven
and she's watchin' over you and me
Well my little girl is 23
I walk her down the aisle
it's a shame her mom can't be here now
to see her lovely smile
They throw the rice
I catch her eye
as the rain starts comin' down
she takes my hand says daddy don't be sad 'cause
I know momma's watchin' now
And there's holes in the floor of Heaven
and her tears are pourin down
that's how you know she's watchin'
wishin' she could be here now
and sometimes when I'm lonely
I remember she can see
there's holes in the floor of Heaven
and she's watchin' over you and me
Watchin' over you and me
Watchin' over you and me
Watchin' over you and me
RIP Marietta Rankin
There is nothing more comforting than a blanket of faith!
Thanx 2 all the amazing people in my life.
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Kelli on September 14, 2005I just wanted to say thanks for the comment on my poem. Everything is really hard right now, but I know it will eventually get better. But anyways, thanks for the comment.
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Disturbedmess on August 6, 2005hey, i appriciate the help, its nice to know that there are people out there who really do care, and that means a lot to me... im amanda, but you can call me mandy, most people do.
thats really cool, i have a bf to, and his name is also Andy, and i have a brother andy, and my dad is andy, and my bfs dad is also andy, there are alot of andys. sorry im kinda babbling now, i tend to do that, i dont know why, well ill talk to ya later, if you have aim we can also talk, mine is disturbedchic688 or my yahoo is prettyangelcuzisaidso -
SimpleComplexity on June 24, 2005Thanks so much for the points. Your a big help! I'm up to 175 now! I only need like 225 more! If you have any friends on here who you think may have points to spare, plz ask them to help. Let them know I will comment on their poetry! Thanks so much!
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