hey everyone... my name is melyssa and i am 15 years old and love to write poetry obviously... please dont hold back any criticism (which i probaby spelled that wrong so yea)...and any comments.. all are welcome and i look forward to meeting everyone....
-lil lyssa
-lil lyssa
- Last seen on Mar 24 6:52 PM 2007. Member since February 8, 2007.
- I'm a emerald dog poet for 6 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "sometimes giving up doent mean you weak... sometimes it just means your strong enough to let go....".
- I am a 15 year old girl from California (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm thinking....
- I have 6 comments, 12 poems
My Poetry
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my heart cries tears
i cant show on my face -
the world is changing
i feel it in my bones -
im so tired of this feeling
one slit, my only hope
Guest Book
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tabbykat10988 : its me!!! on February 16, 2007just wanted to say i love you my lil lyssa...
you are amazing!!!!??? lol... hugs and kisses
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Broken Machine : Hey! on February 8, 2007Hey, from what I kind of read cause my eyes are like burning and I'm really tired it looks like you write really good poems, keep up the good work! I'll try and comment them tomorrow after I sleep!
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Samplette : Welcome to Allpoetry on February 8, 2007Welcome, hope you find the joy we all have in this poetic neighbor hood.
Sam
