I write a lot of free verse, so if you have something against it you should leave now. I am however, experimenting a little with other styles, in time, you will see a little more variety. I'm still not very good with meter and if anyone has any pointers, on that subject, that they would like to share, it would be greatly appreciated.
- Last seen on Dec 3 4:37 PM. Member since September 8, 2005.
- I'm a carnelian hope poet for 142 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "FUCK!".
- I am a 19 year old guy from Georgia (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a disgrace.
- Visit my homepage at www.illwillpress.com
- I have 142 comments, 2 contests, 1 addline, 31 poems
My Poetry
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When too much is never enough addiction resides
in the corridors of my asylumn. My thirst for you hides,11 lines, 1 comment, November 27 -
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My skin tingles as your warm breat licks at my neck,
contrasting your cool fingers running down my spine.10 lines, July 12
Guest Book
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perfect relief : You are so great!!!! on December 4, 2006I won an honorable mention because you make an awesome subject for my poetry. ("Our First Kiss"...one of your favorites). Thank you so much for everything baby...and much love.
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broken.inside on November 4, 2006I read all your poems and they are all tear-jerking or breathtaking in some way. I hope to read more poems from you.
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Snyder on May 22, 2006Hey...
Yeah... I agree... we have gotten a lot closer... and I'm glad for that... cause I'm really glad to know you... I'm glad to know that you're there for me... and I'm there for you... even if its for the same thing... We should help each other... cause it will help us both out in the end... so... yeah.
Yeah... we have known each other longer... but... we still barely talk or known much about each other... really... But we do know that we can always find something to talk about... oh... and after high schools over... we'll be even closer... so... yeah... don't worry... we'll be calling...
We got to keep hangin out... cause we share a lot... even our problems... we may not show it... but... every time we see her it still hurts... it always does for me... and that's why I'm glad I have someone I can talk too... cause we share the problem... so it's a lot easier to talk about it, to a person that shares the same problem...
Just know that I'm here for you... to talk too... even if its not about our 'little problem'... I'm here to talk too... hang out with... play football... smoke a cigarette... or just to throw fries at Casey... We need to hang out more then just in school... maybe we can do something over the summer... and... if Erin's cool with it... bring her along too... if she's comfortable with it... that be cool... I got a pool... and a pool table... so yeah... I don't know... we can do whatever...
You say to wish that I would get another chance... Well... we both say that... So... if it ever happens... and one of us gets lucky... and gets another chance... Then the other will be there too... as back up... as a friend... and... what ever happens... we're still cool... and we're still friends...
Just hang in there, Chris... I miss her too...
-TJ
