I am 18 years old. I attend Lycoming College, seeking an unknown major. Perhaps Criminal Justice or Creative Writing. I like both....ok enough rambling. I am from many different places in Pennsylvania (blame the foster care system, they don't seem to know what to do with orphans) and I find inspiration for my poetry through my difficult childhood. Please feel free to read and comment all of my poems.
Poetry is my outlet; it is my place of freedom when times get hard which I have found that they often do. Forgive me if my poetry is not grammatically correct (although I do try to spell check and revise as much as possible) or in correct format. I am not accustomed to poetic format and I do not know if I ever will be.
However, I am always open to constructive criticism. Your comments will only make me a better person and help me to become a better poet, so please...Be picky!! lol
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Poetry is my outlet; it is my place of freedom when times get hard which I have found that they often do. Forgive me if my poetry is not grammatically correct (although I do try to spell check and revise as much as possible) or in correct format. I am not accustomed to poetic format and I do not know if I ever will be.
However, I am always open to constructive criticism. Your comments will only make me a better person and help me to become a better poet, so please...Be picky!! lol
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- Last seen 2 hours ago. Member since September 23.
- I'm a carnelian hope poet for 129 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "Loving Life outside the System".
- I am a 18 year old man from Pennsylvania (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm Full time student at Lycoming College for Criminal Justice.
- I am in the groups Do you want your poem read
- I have 129 comments, 33 poems
Poems I'm focused on
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I spill my heart on paper because somehow paper understands
When I tell my story to paper it accepts it and lets it stand14 lines, 13 comments, October 19
My Poetry
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I sense demonic voices that are in my head.
The devils minion sits at the foot of my bed.15 lines, 1 comment, November 22 -
As you read this please take note
You are a witness to my heartbeat -
The angles peek from their nests perched in the sky
To shine down a beam of light from heaven17 lines, 12 comments, November 14 -
Four quarters of it ablaze
Set aflame by a fiery phoenix14 lines, 9 comments, November 11
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Parabol on November 20I've read a few of yours and they are pretty much all good. Keep it up you could have a future in this stuff. Don't think no one is reading or no one cares. We do we want damn good art us fellow writers we thrive on that stuff even the bad stuff cuz the shit poems and stories even make us think and laugh a bit. Put your soul on the paper never let up never hold back let the pen fly and the ink stain the paper like all the crap experiences of you life stain your mind. Remember everything and never let go because its the little things that matter most to writer the big stuff is too damn easy to write about.
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deeply.desturbed on November 17heyy! i agree with EVERYTHING on your page...lol. i love criminal justice (lots of cop shows ) and creative writting! i like alot of your stuff!
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WindUpEnigma on October 28Welcome to AP. =) Hope you find the site as useful and welcoming as I have.
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kamikage : hi! on October 24just passing through AP; I noticed you don't have any guestbook entries. I noticed you became a member last month, and you already have 20 poems - that's some intense creativity there. You seem like a really nice person and I'm looking forward to more of your poetry.
