I'm 22 and I love the color orange
Turtles and ferrets are my favorite animals
I am a certified trainer and waiter at Bugaboo Creek
I am quite weird but hey who isn't
I am awful at spelling
Monty Python rules, no questions asked, got it?
Any questions, just ask AIM (anotherbadlarry)
I am currently enrolled in a creative writing poetry class and I am learning much. I took a poetry class before but this one is allowing me to understand what I did not before.
When I leave comments I will try to be honest, but in a constructive way. Many people get to sentimental about their pieces but if you want to improve you need to take critism in order to delevop your full potentail. Editing is very important as we can't always do this right the first time. The same goes for me, I will be currently re-editing many of my pieces to help them reach their full potentail.
Once more thing, and it irks me greatly. Adjectives and adverbs in poetry are what should be considered 5 cent words, they cannot move a piece. NOUNS AND VERBS what what move your piece along, what I am saying is USING FANCY WORDS does not mean your piece is strong, while it may look nice and show you have strong word selection it does not normally work in most pieces, there are expections, however.
"Things never are as bad as they seem, so dream dream dream"
Frank Sinatra
A hint before reading some of my pieces, please read them more than once. There are quite a few of my poems that are not what they seem to be, this is done for a reason but many people do not stop to think when reading some of my works."Ode to Bear" and "Oh Baby You Dirty My Mind" are two examples.
Thanks for reading my works, if I see a comment from anyone, I will try my best to return the favor as soon as possible!
Turtles and ferrets are my favorite animals
I am a certified trainer and waiter at Bugaboo Creek
I am quite weird but hey who isn't
I am awful at spelling
Monty Python rules, no questions asked, got it?
Any questions, just ask AIM (anotherbadlarry)
I am currently enrolled in a creative writing poetry class and I am learning much. I took a poetry class before but this one is allowing me to understand what I did not before.
When I leave comments I will try to be honest, but in a constructive way. Many people get to sentimental about their pieces but if you want to improve you need to take critism in order to delevop your full potentail. Editing is very important as we can't always do this right the first time. The same goes for me, I will be currently re-editing many of my pieces to help them reach their full potentail.
Once more thing, and it irks me greatly. Adjectives and adverbs in poetry are what should be considered 5 cent words, they cannot move a piece. NOUNS AND VERBS what what move your piece along, what I am saying is USING FANCY WORDS does not mean your piece is strong, while it may look nice and show you have strong word selection it does not normally work in most pieces, there are expections, however.
"Things never are as bad as they seem, so dream dream dream"
Frank Sinatra
A hint before reading some of my pieces, please read them more than once. There are quite a few of my poems that are not what they seem to be, this is done for a reason but many people do not stop to think when reading some of my works."Ode to Bear" and "Oh Baby You Dirty My Mind" are two examples.
Thanks for reading my works, if I see a comment from anyone, I will try my best to return the favor as soon as possible!
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- I'm a opaline dream poet for 955 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "You don't have to be a wise man to speak words of wisdom".
- I am a 22 year old man from Massachusetts (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm I am in a band www.myspace.com/webeneath , I am an English Major at Umass Lowell.
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Do you relish the idea of a mystery man?
A wild night to let loose,40 lines, 42 comments, January 16, 2007. In Fantasy
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My first Villanelle form.29 lines, 16 comments, September 24, 2007
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XxDie In VainxX : Ello,,!! (: on February 5Thanx For The Comment,,I Posted That "Love" Poem God Knows How Long Ago Now,,I Wasn't Much Into It Then,,But I'm Pretty Good Now,,LOL,,Atleast That's What People Tell Me,,Haha,,Hows Yu,,?? xXx
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XxDie In VainxX : Hey on February 5Thanx For The Comment,,I Posted That "Love" Poem God Knows How Long Ago Now,,I Wasn't Much Into It Then,,But I'm Pretty Good Now,,LOL,,Atleast That's What People Tell Me,,Haha,,Hows Yu,,?? xXx
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Promulgate Veracity on December 11, 2007You like Orange AND Turtles???
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xHannahrexiax on November 20, 2007Hey, thanks for commenting on my song.
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