Hey Everyone,
A big thank you to Galfalfa for all her help and support here, without her, I wouldnt have even been able to type this LOL.
I am a simple poet, and to me poems are snapshots of raw emotion, an insight into ones soul, therefore, you can take your metaphors and similys and shove them up your arse, If I want them in my poems they will be there, please feel free to be a criticl as you like, if you think a poem is shit, please say so, but i dont wanna hear "Oh it needs more metaphors" and crap like that, if you like them use them, my poems are for the people, by that I mean all the people, so I purposly write them so that everyone gets them.
Happy writing, and happy reading.
Best wishes
Jamie
A big thank you to Galfalfa for all her help and support here, without her, I wouldnt have even been able to type this LOL.
I am a simple poet, and to me poems are snapshots of raw emotion, an insight into ones soul, therefore, you can take your metaphors and similys and shove them up your arse, If I want them in my poems they will be there, please feel free to be a criticl as you like, if you think a poem is shit, please say so, but i dont wanna hear "Oh it needs more metaphors" and crap like that, if you like them use them, my poems are for the people, by that I mean all the people, so I purposly write them so that everyone gets them.
Happy writing, and happy reading.
Best wishes
Jamie
- Last seen on Jun 23 3:18 PM. Member since September 18, 2006.
- I'm a obsidian idea poet for 578 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "Its far better to have loved and lost, then to have never loved at all!".
- I am a 33 year old guy (Great Britain)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a Senior Data Consultant (yaaawn).



- I have 578 comments, 1 contest, 38 poems
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Some people choose drink,
some drugs and some pain,28 lines, 282 comments, September 24, 2006. In Hope
My Poetry
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And so you sit and wonder why,
your life is crap, and drifting by. -
Oh how I miss your tender touch, / the texts we used to send so much, / the haunting melody of you voice, / would always be my sound of choice, / the tender kisses that you'd place, / upon my lips with loving grace.
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This Mothers day wish is just for you,
one whos heart is pure and true.7 lines, 9 comments, March 17, 2007. In Personal -
Plucked from our lives you left a hole,
one that no song or words can console.13 lines, 14 comments, March 8, 2007
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galfalfa : LOL on June 5, 2007I am a simple poet, and to me poems are snapshots of raw emotion, an insight into ones soul, therefore, you can take your metaphors and similys and shove them up your arse, If I want them in my poems they will be there,



Love your way with words...miss ya
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Mattchoo : you've only grown and gotten better on June 5, 2007its been.... awhile.
I had to check.
think of you often.
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esroddo : Its been a long time I have missed you Hope all is well with you (Lisa) on May 11, 2007
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galfalfa on February 2, 2007Hey there cutie pie

Thought i'd stop in and see how you're doing..hope all is well - thinking of you
galf

