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JacKerowac

My goal is to create a mental image in as few words as possible.
I don't want to tell a long winded story...I want the reader to take the words, explore them and, hopefully, get an emotional reaction, be it funny, sad, whatever.
I invite you to come in, review my work. I say review purposefully, as I welcome your feedback as I grow in this art.

Merci'
JacK

  • Last seen on Dec 23 7:35 PM 2007. Member since March 6, 2007.
  • I'm a peridot parrot poet for 38 comments.
  • I am a 49 year old person (United States)
  • I am in the groups Real Critiques
  • I have 38 comments

My Poetry

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  • It's Over
    0 lines, 3 comments, April 26, 2007
  • Rules
    Marionnett of arrogance, / Feelings tangled, / Colliding with indifference, / From the depths of bile / Arises compliance
    4 lines, April 26, 2007. In Contemporary, Thoughts, Other
  • Tears
    Run away from reality, / Take it to another place, / A place where dreams / Won't let you down. / / Your arms shelter me, / I look into y
    24 lines, 4 comments, April 26, 2007. In Sad, Thoughts, Love
  • One
    Revolutionaries stand, unwavering
    Against the force of unrelenting power.
    7 lines, 3 comments, April 7, 2007. In Thoughts

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