Hey everyone, im new to this site. Im 18 years old, and im from Paris, Illinois. I've been writing Poetry for Three years now and i plan to major in writing in college. So if you could just give me some feedback on my work, hope you all like it.
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- Last seen on Sep 15 10:36 AM. Member since January 29, 2008.
- I'm a amethyst understanding poet for 23 comments.
- I am a 18 year old guy from Illinois (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm Backyard Wrestling, Drawing, Welding, Being A Big Brother.
- I have 23 comments, 17 poems, 3 stories
My Poetry
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The years will pass like grains of sand. They will blow away and become nothing.
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If you know her, you love her. If you don’t, you lust her.
My Stories
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1 / At twelve o’clock midnight the moon is high and the pulse of the sleeping are slow and weak. Except for Evan Mitchell. Evan’s pulse was rapid; his heart was almost full to bursting. Beads of1072 lines, March 28, 2008. In 600-2000 words, Horror
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1 / “Son, it’s time to get out of bed.” Tommy’s mother said to him quietly. Tommy opened his eyes slowly and looked at the clock, 7:45 am. “JESUS!” Tommy said to himself while jumping out of bed.2965 lines, 1 comment, February 2, 2008. In 2000-5000 words
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1 / A man grieves over the death of his wife in the quiet town of Pascow, Massachusetts. The man’s name is Thomas Richards, his wife died of a terrible asthma attack the day before. Thomas loved
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Mow on February 8, 2008yea michael i showed it to him
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Michael555 on February 4, 2008Hey I didn't know you wrote on this poetry site! Awesome
