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"When The Rain Falls So Does His Heart"

thunder rumbles;
people and words form behind his eyes
heartache and goodbyes
stain his fingertips
voices in his head speak to him
(they yell and they hurt but he can't resist them)

rain falls;
and the words pour out beat for beat
lightening strikes like he broke
open the sky
still, his hand races across the page
as he traces phantom touches and
lonely sighs
(can you feel him tremble?)

the wind blows;
he holds the fate of his story
but he sways to the desperation of
empty hearts and salty lips
and he still feels the power of words
they taste like the freedom of the ocean breeze
(he smiles and it hurts like sunshine)

the cloud parts;
he sits and watches
(he still burns and i am blinded)

Jenny Jiang

~~~

I used to have a profile here and have things about me that really didn't matter. I have realized that the world doesn't need to know me. The world doesn't need to see me.
The world just need to open their ears and heart and listen to us.
The poets.
I am one of many and my writing is no different.
I am human and I experience and then write.
This my truth
And I stand by it

  • Last seen 2 days ago. Member since December 20, 2004.
  • I'm a malachite opening poet for 407 comments.
  • My mood is , and quote is "Far from reaching home".
  • I am a 18 year old guy from New Mexico (United States)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm a lazy person .
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    dude monkey is that you JUAN? its me Xavier. aragornlotr21@msn.com my e-mail look for me on facebook or myspace and message me dude.
  • Araina on July 24, 2008
    You are by far one of the best poets on this site. I just thought you should know that.
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    heeeeeey! i think we were once friends on here. i was reading an old message thing you left on my page about how scary hover-rounds are. your page is hilarious. and Twiggy sounds like an awesome band. i'm in a band.. but i can't remember the name right now. we were once called subordinate conjunctions but that time has passed! we changed are name and our first album will be subordinate conjunctions. i'll let you know when it's out.

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