I use writing as a release, and have always wondered if it was quality or crap, so i was hoping to get some constructive criticism on here. i'm open to criticism as long as it is something that will help me benefit me as a writer not some random banter like " this is crap give up", feel free to message me with any questions, i'm somewhat personable.
- Last seen on Nov 16 3:21 PM. Member since September 30, 2007.
- I'm a emerald dog poet for 7 comments.
- I am a 19 year old guy from Pennsylvania (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm listening to music, going to class the usual college kid stuff. I'm a metal head, yup..
- I have 7 comments, 69 poems
Poems I'm focused on
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And know that within every part of me, Darkness sprawls,61 lines, 1 comment, April 7, 2008
My Poetry
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Step back, evaluate and recognize,
These ideas more tarnished than harnessed,27 lines, May 18 -
I tear myself apart the seams,
And for what?31 lines, April 11 -
After years of renovating,
Finally content with the drapes of subtle interaction,32 lines, March 21
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lovemedeath on September 5, 2008nice name!!! & cool background
