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A relative newcomer to poetry, I am hoping to explore and expand my perceptions as I grow in experience. I feel humour is very important in expression and hope that I can integrate that with some darker, yet important, ideas.

I would be grateful if people could offer honest criticism, if my writing is poor or good, could you tell me why so I can learn from what I write. At the moment I feel I am at the bottom of a slope, but you can often move further with a wrong turn than a right one. I hope I can also offer my own insights into the writing of others that may prove useful.

I have recently had various poems published in newspapers and books. This was all quite flattering, but I still feel like I have a long way to go in finding my feet.

  • Last seen on May 24 3:10 AM. Member since March 20, 2006.
  • I'm a aventurine thought poet for 56 comments.
  • I have 56 comments, 11 poems

My Poetry

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  • To bear the binds of eloquence
    To walked in polished shoes
    10 lines, 2 comments, August 20, 2007. In Society, Other, Thoughts, Humanity
  • A farewell to arms, a goodbye to legs
    To be finally drowned out by the civilised dregs
    21 lines, 4 comments, March 18, 2007. In Society, Thoughts
  • It's fast approaching Christmas, so raise your voice with joy
    For commercialistic enterprise unveiling its new ploy
    13 lines, 1 comment, December 24, 2006. In Society, Christmas
  • The sun's shining through

    These October skies
    16 lines, 7 comments, November 7, 2006. In Personal, Love

Guest Book

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  • Walking shadow on July 18, 2006
    Thank you for your support and dropping by my poetry section.
    Coast To Coast has been a real inspiration for the more creative part of me. I feel the show has opened my eyes to the paranormal.
    The so called normal is now being question. George Noory and Art Bell express themselves so well about the strange times we are in.
    It is long overdue we had a global unity project. We must find ways to start bringing people together before we run out of time.
    I do not know how many poets listen to coast but I feel there are many. I work too much and miss way to many shows. I cannot stand swing shift.
    Thanks again for all your support.

    Jon Miler

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