If I Could Go Back

For Once I Was A Man Who Had It All,
Until Life Got A Grip, And I Began To Fall,
As I Fall Like Alice Once Upon A Time,
And All The Things I See Are In Every Line,
These Wall Collapse And Suffocate,
My Words Burn And Irritate.

So Walk Along These Pages Of My World,
Just Watch Out For Some Of The Words,... They Bite.

Last seen on Nov 19 8:36 PM. Member since July 15, 2006.
I'm a carnelian hope poet for 99 comments.
My mood is , and quote is "Has Lost The Will To Write. Will Probally Not Be On AP Much Longer.".
I am a 19 year old guy (Canada)
When I'm not writing, I'm Everything..
I have 99 comments, 56 poems

My Poetry

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To Many Questions.

24 lines, 1 comment, November 6
Cry

Strive For What You Want.
Push It Away.

33 lines, 3 comments, November 4
Now That Feels Good.

See I'm at a loss for words,
In fact it seems I'm losing everything.

22 lines, October 24
And Feeling Just A Little Bit Better.

Here I sit at this very point in my life I'm not sure where I'm going,
I'm doing all these things for everyone else.

57 lines, 2 comments, October 4

Guest Book

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Sky Princess : Hi *happy* on August 3

Hi, I just finished reading a few of your poems I think you are definately a great writer!! I loved then all great poems, thanks for writing them
Liz
Lsh-x : Thankyou on June 19

Hello, I'm not online very often, but I've logged on and I saw your comment on my most recent poem. Thankyou, I'm going to read some of yours and give you my opinions. Thankyou.

Lsh-x.
rosepetalsonice on April 1, 2008

I miss you. I Miss a lot of things...
If I Could Go Back : Love Them As You Will, Remember Them As They Were, Forget Them Not, But Move Forward And Keep Them In Your Heart. on August 28, 2007