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Hello i am Lorin i am 15 years old and i have been writting poetry for who knows how long??
i write mostly about love,hope,and depression.

i have had a pretty hard life...worse the others...but better then some.
But i am thankful for a-lot.
i am thankful for my mom, and my 2 sisters.
god couldnt have givin me a better gift.
i am thankful for my friends, they mean the world to me.

my dads side of the family...they really couldnt care less about me. im not like them. they are all i guess you could say "perfect"?
and me? i am far from it.
they treat me differently like i am from some toher planet and i need special treatment.
but i get over it.

cause i reameber everything i am thankful for.

and i remeber my poetry.

and when i have a bad day...thats when poetry comes in handy the most..for me.

  • Last seen on Jul 13 7:42 PM 2007. Member since March 1, 2007.
  • I'm a amber angel poet for 4 comments.
  • My mood is , and quote is "live life to the fullest.".
  • I am a 15 year old girl (United States)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm school, singing, dancing.
  • I am in the groups Comments for All
  • I have 4 comments, 10 poems

My Poetry

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  • How i really feel
    In my heart, / deep down inside of me, / i feel as though i am not important. / i feel as though no one cares, / no ones there. / I try and reach for perfection, / i try and reach for my goals. / i fail, of cour
    17 lines, July 5, 2007
  • Not Only a broken heart, but a broken future
    to know what it feels like / to know the hurt and pain i feel. / you finally broke me. / hidden behind my shattered heart, / you couldnt care less. / you need to understand / my life without you, / is like no li
    13 lines, July 5, 2007
  • Let me let go
    let me let go. / let go of the good times, / let go of your soft touch. / let me let go of the times we've spent, / let me let go of your gentle kiss. / let us get on with our lives, / let us reach our goals.
    14 lines, July 5, 2007
  • Reaching Perfection
    What a wonderful scene / look at the beauty of it. / the water flowing, / the warm breeze over your body. / Seems perfect. / here in the moment, / i see your face. / its haunting me. / your everywhere i am
    15 lines, July 5, 2007

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