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Grey Void

  • Last seen on Aug 29 9:37 PM 2005. Member since December 19, 2004.
  • I'm a supertopaz delight poet for 63 comments.
  • I am a 16 year old person
  • I have 63 comments, 4 poems, 1 story

My Poetry

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My Stories

  • Twill leaned against the rain barrel on the corner of the stone-paved, yet dusty, streets of Vandrel. A gust sent shawls and skirts fluttering, reminding him of a flock of bird
    2844 lines, 3 comments, January 9, 2005. In <200 lines, Fantasy

Guest Book

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  • Grey Void on January 6, 2005
    i'm slow at writing and have 2 storys i'm starting, but there isn't enough to make a good crituque story wise, like *points to own head* its all up here, but to move from there onto paper/computer is challenging for me ;/ i'm working on a co-story w/ sleepyeyedreams though, so once we get the first chapter done, maybe in a week, then it will probably get posted.
    as for poetry, i don't do much, i tend not to save it after i write it, just a vent thing, so i'll be doing storys predominently,
    lol sorry for all the useless babble
    -grey void

    btw, that was a realy cool story you had, sorry if i don't criticize well, i'm not even to colledge yet so i feel ackward critiquing people who are more knowledgeable than me
    (sorry for rambling again, lol)
  • coolmommy on January 5, 2005
    hmm, how come you dont have any poetry or anything? I would lik to see some so i can read it! since you did read one of mine.
  • HisxGirl on December 19, 2004
    WElcome to AP! hope to se some of your stuff soon!
  • SleepyEyedreams on December 19, 2004
    Welcome to AllPoetry and I hope you enjoy this site, otherwise send it a virus and then laugh as all the poets scream in pain because they never saved their stuff to disk. Losers. Well now your only job is to post some stuff.

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