Been off allpoetry for a long time but its nice to read some work again and write some more.
i'm sorry my page isn't exciting, with beautiful pictures and swooshing menus. but i do hope you will read one or two of my poems, and comment on them truthfully, what you liked, what you didn't, what you'd change or which lines struck you, before you leave.
you might like to try my first - Lost Regret
something short and sweet - morning view, spring beginning
or one of my favourites - glass house on the hill, spinedance, blissful press, to and fro
i look forward to reading your poetry
i'm sorry my page isn't exciting, with beautiful pictures and swooshing menus. but i do hope you will read one or two of my poems, and comment on them truthfully, what you liked, what you didn't, what you'd change or which lines struck you, before you leave.
you might like to try my first - Lost Regret
something short and sweet - morning view, spring beginning
or one of my favourites - glass house on the hill, spinedance, blissful press, to and fro
i look forward to reading your poetry
- Member since November 13, 2003.
- I'm a moonstone path poet for 460 comments.
- I am a 23 year old guy (England)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a history student.



- I have 460 comments, 28 poems
My Poetry
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you glow,
and i take my daily dose16 lines, 2 comments, August 23, 2008. In longing, infatuation -
I found a broken angel
it fell because of me -
Your pale beauty takes my eyes
your snow white binding calling me16 lines, 7 comments, March 25, 2008
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fathom me on December 31, 2008Happy New Year!! :-)

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Mari Goes on October 30, 2007HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!

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Ishtar on January 16, 2007Thank you, Glitch, for the wonderful comments.
I'll make sure to browse through you work, as well.
P.S. I actually moved from England a year and some months ago. What part are you from?
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dp robertson on December 16, 2005thank you for all your comments this year, they are always appreciated- I am looking forward to reading more of your words next year. I wish you the happiest Christmas and all the best for 2006
David
may your sack never be empty
