- Last seen on Feb 12 5:38 PM 2008. Member since September 28, 2003.
- I'm a supertopaz delight poet for 85 comments.
- I am a 27 year old guy (United States)
- I have 85 comments, 15 poems, 3 stories
My Poetry
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Stretch and stretch and stretch as far as far and wide. It is the alfalfa fields, the cotton and the countryside. It is the dusty road and ditch that down below the roads that stitch that all around the farms they0 lines, May 18, 2007
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There is no infatuation left to me that is more sveltely sinister than she. A cold life of comfort without passion portends my doltish desi
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Paaaarrrrrtay, she’d say, and do her little bangers ball shimmy.
I had a crush on my moms best friend.25 lines, 6 comments, October 7, 2003. In Personal
My Stories
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It was Basic, and I had survived. I had jumped through all the right hoops, watched others fall by the wayside, but I had survived. All stood now in glistening rank140 lines, February 20, 2005. In <200 lines, Fiction
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I’d been burning superman with a lighter, with the flutter of flame, the smell of melted plastic, eclipsed by the flicker of the Twilight Zone, on that Black and White TV. &nbs214 lines, July 3, 2004. In <200 lines, Other
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Your laugh is past apocalypse; the bliss, oh the bliss at just a thought of it. I remember spending all my spare time writing you love letters, in that summer of sam, wor274 lines, 1 comment, July 2, 2004. In <200 lines, Other
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Morning Rain on February 28, 2005Hey Doug...just returning the hello. Glad to see you. ~Amber
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LunaEtoile on February 27, 2004Just checking back after a long absense on my part, and I'm sure you are wondering who I am. Darkstarsmyst. I went through a namechange is all, hope it didn't confuse you in that Third Person poem critique. I really enjoy your work, and will return to check out some more. Take care.
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Rockgirl10987 on October 7, 2003Hey, I read through alot of your poems, and i thought most of them were great, but i had no idea how to comment on them, Some were about serious things, and some were about not-so-serious things, but either way they just completely floored me by their way of presenting issues so relaxed sounding, is this making sense? I just htought I'd let ya know. great job, and keep writing, your writing is brilliant...
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Flotsam on October 3, 2003Yeah I guess that was part of my temporary preferred member stuff. Ahh well.
