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Flagrancy: the state of being so obviously inconsistent with what is right or proper as to appear to be a flouting of law or morality



Make sure to check my lists and I'm really proud of The Art of Verse Writing ); Everyone read my new list/book type thing...it's poetry based on my thoughts that I rarely show..it's called Inside These Tears and it's finally completed!


A Few Notes to my Readers and some Comments about Writing

Okay. About the Featured Poems. I'm tired of featuring my poems and a lot of people read but never comment. Next person to do that, I'm going to go over your house, mess up your computer, and come back here to make sure you never do it again .

Another annoying thing is to leave a comment, but never elaborate on it, or to say you don't understand a poem, but then say it's about one thing...people, NEVER assume. It makes an ass out of you and me.

Also...what's up with other teenagers acting bad and whatever just because their boy (or girlfriends) dumped them? Some people don't even state the real story, they just say: "I hate you! You broke my heart...I'm going to commit suicide." If it's a common problem, you don't have to act like that at all. I know you're new to the game and everything, but chill, you don't have to kill yourself just because someone did ONE thing to offend you.

STOP WRITING ANYTHING THAT CONTRADICTS ITSELF. Well I can't tell you what to write because we all have the freedom of speech and the press...you can do whatever you want but everything you do WILL catch up to you.

For writers

There are some poetry forms that you should be familiar with before you do them; there are some types of things to look for when critiquing poetry other than what the poem itself is about. When you want to think of what you're writing, expand your thoughts, or perhaps take notes so that you can send your message clearly. (I think I should take my own advice )

If you want to read more of my pet peeves in writing or in society in general, make sure to read my column(s).
That's all I have for the annoying things. I will have more later. I'm a person full of complaints, (you can see that in my poems), but please feel free to respond.

My Contest Winners

Gold: The Replicated Thoughts of Tears
allpoetry.com/Poem/548968
Silver: Dirge of Life
allpoetry.com/Poem/597290
Bronze: Cry
allpoetry.com/poem/359086
Honorable Mention:
An Inner Drug
allpoetry.com/Poem/427358
Grilled Steak and Macaroni Salad
allpoetry.com/Poem/659727
Could've Been
allpoetry.com/Poem/543243





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