Deep inside the confines of your heart
You hide the pain you try to brave
Someone hears what you try not to say
Your confessions dig your grave...
My friend Ian wrote this Acrostic for me ... He's a dear
FirstScript ( Acrostic )
Flowers roam beauty's realm; delicate thoughts
inside the heart beating with love's passion,
rain dances beside her cool summer smiles;
singing to the heaven's mystery where
the robotic worlds wink imagination.
Softly sliding seductive scenery
cruises dreams; fulfilment's sanctuary,
reality waits for another time
in the future's welcoming arms of peace,
pleasantly perfecting generous laughs,
the whole world skips rainbows for her pleasure.
My Winning Poetry !
~ Gold ~
allpoetry.com/poem/2249625 : Fragments of the Sky
allpoetry.com/Poem/2011253 : Touch Of Scarlet
allpoetry.com/Poem/1895128 : On Wings - Sestina
allpoetry.com/Poem/1857550 : Not
~ Silver ~
allpoetry.com/Poem/1855693 : Burning Bright - Villanelle
allpoetry.com/Poem/1974348 : You Never Tell Me
allpoetry.com/Poem/1979211 : Return
allpoetry.com/Poem/2135079 : World Of Wonders - Sestina
~ Bronze ~
allpoetry.com/Poem/1821330 : Someone In My Dream
allpoetry.com/Poem/1703321 : The Unknown
allpoetry.com/Poem/2016105 : Feathered Shadows
allpoetry.com/Poem/2161952 : Beyond the Grave
allpoetry.com/poem/2249666 : She
I'm trying my hand at form poetry...
allpoetry.com/poem/2217173 : Individuality - Acrostic
allpoetry.com/poem/2217135 : FirstScript - Pleiades
allpoetry.com/Poem/2165036 : Existentialism - Acrostic
allpoetry.com/poem/2151363 : Memories of the Waves - Duette
allpoetry.com/Poem/2049793 : Ostentation - Acrostic
allpoetry.com/Poem/2049750 : Perfection Rebuilt - Sestina
allpoetry.com/Poem/2036359 : Silent Prayer - Sestina
allpoetry.com/poem/2034496 : Mermaid Murmurs - Acrostic
allpoetry.com/poem/2007366 : Penguins Doing Aerobics - Acrostic
allpoetry.com/poem/2007334 : Eternally Dark - Acrostic
allpoetry.com/Poem/1976670 : Veiled Feelings Bend Gracefully - Acrostic
allpoetry.com/poem/1893431 : Hope to Escape - Paradelle
allpoetry.com/poem/1888715 : Unchained Melody - Acrostic
allpoetry.com/Poem/1880882 : By Your Side - Acrostic
allpoetry.com/Poem/1878391 : Innocence - Triptych
allpoetry.com/poem/1859160 : Unseen Angel - Rictameter
allpoetry.com/poem/1858184 : The Candles Light Your Face - Cinquain Garland
allpoetry.com/Poem/1857670 : Tears - Nonet
allpoetry.com/Poem/1854045 : The Chains Within - Acrostic
allpoetry.com/Poem/1851670 : Building Dreams - Cinquain Garland
allpoetry.com/Poem/1851365 : Grammy - Tryptich
allpoetry.com/Poem/1848892 : Unwritten - Acrostic
allpoetry.com/Poem/1816987 : The Rose - Tryptich
allpoetry.com/Poem/1843302 : Scorching sunbeams - Haiku
And finally... the rest of my work !
allpoetry.com/Poem/2249636 : Picture-Perfect
allpoetry.com/Poem/2185016 : Under Construction
allpoetry.com/Poem/2177328 : Non Omnis Moriar
allpoetry.com/Poem/2177288 : Purple Cloaks
allpoetry.com/Poem/2159988 : Yesterday and Tomorrow
allpoetry.com/Poem/2013793 : I Fly
allpoetry.com/Poem/2007282 : To Be Yours
allpoetry.com/Poem/1996396 : Nothing Is Mine
allpoetry.com/poem/1996285 : Shades Of Love
allpoetry.com/poem/1995011 : Free
allpoetry.com/Poem/1994996 : The Day I Met You
allpoetry.com/Poem/1976913 : I Am
allpoetry.com/Poem/1968884 : One Glance
allpoetry.com/poem/1962731 : Repainted Vision
allpoetry.com/poem/1937405 : Nascent Vapours
allpoetry.com/Poem/1933616 : Within
allpoetry.com/poem/1925381 : Naked Abandon
allpoetry.com/Poem/1925312 : Salted Dreams
allpoetry.com/Poem/1888273 : New Feathers
allpoetry.com/Poem/1888214 : Courage
allpoetry.com/Poem/1888117 : Chained
allpoetry.com/Poem/1878486 : Shimmering Ripples
allpoetry.com/Poem/1878453 : Yellowing Proof
allpoetry.com/Poem/1859149 : I Will Move Away
allpoetry.com/Poem/1853595 : Soul Flew Free
allpoetry.com/Poem/1853549 : After I'm Gone
allpoetry.com/Poem/1852074 : When These Days Pass Me By
allpoetry.com/Poem/1848956 : It Was Me
allpoetry.com/Poem/1842104 : Embrace
allpoetry.com/Poem/1842000 : Little Wings
allpoetry.com/Poem/1841133 : I Surrender
allpoetry.com/Poem/1839116 : I Can't
allpoetry.com/Poem/1839092 : White Paper
allpoetry.com/Poem/1839083 : Somedays
allpoetry.com/Poem/1824936 : One More Turn
allpoetry.com/Poem/1824598 : Different Eyes
allpoetry.com/Poem/1822924 : Ghost
allpoetry.com/Poem/1822662 : All For Nothing
allpoetry.com/Poem/1816856 : Vanishing Point
allpoetry.com/Poem/1731515 : Eyes
allpoetry.com/Poem/1709962 : Borrowed Soul
allpoetry.com/Poem/1709882 : No Smiles
allpoetry.com/Poem/1705637 : Ocean's Moon
My friends on AP - few, but all special special souls
My mentor and friend Ian ... a must read on AP
allpoetry.com/poets/chasingtheday
Cynical old man, but a gem
allpoetry.com/poets/cynic
Eric ... he's not at AP now, but his poems still are
allpoetry.com/poets/rogueriverpoet
Alex ... one of my few friends here
allpoetry.com/poets/floorboards
John ... he found me on AP, but I'm glad he did now
allpoetry.com/poets/a%20drop%20of%20light
David ... very new here, but very good too
allpoetry.com/poets/david%20michaels
A gentleman from my city, always around with a smile and advice
allpoetry.com/poets/karabi
You hide the pain you try to brave
Someone hears what you try not to say
Your confessions dig your grave...
My friend Ian wrote this Acrostic for me ... He's a dear
FirstScript ( Acrostic )
Flowers roam beauty's realm; delicate thoughts
inside the heart beating with love's passion,
rain dances beside her cool summer smiles;
singing to the heaven's mystery where
the robotic worlds wink imagination.
Softly sliding seductive scenery
cruises dreams; fulfilment's sanctuary,
reality waits for another time
in the future's welcoming arms of peace,
pleasantly perfecting generous laughs,
the whole world skips rainbows for her pleasure.
My Winning Poetry !
~ Gold ~
allpoetry.com/poem/2249625 : Fragments of the Sky
allpoetry.com/Poem/2011253 : Touch Of Scarlet
allpoetry.com/Poem/1895128 : On Wings - Sestina
allpoetry.com/Poem/1857550 : Not
~ Silver ~
allpoetry.com/Poem/1855693 : Burning Bright - Villanelle
allpoetry.com/Poem/1974348 : You Never Tell Me
allpoetry.com/Poem/1979211 : Return
allpoetry.com/Poem/2135079 : World Of Wonders - Sestina
~ Bronze ~
allpoetry.com/Poem/1821330 : Someone In My Dream
allpoetry.com/Poem/1703321 : The Unknown
allpoetry.com/Poem/2016105 : Feathered Shadows
allpoetry.com/Poem/2161952 : Beyond the Grave
allpoetry.com/poem/2249666 : She
I'm trying my hand at form poetry...
allpoetry.com/poem/2217173 : Individuality - Acrostic
allpoetry.com/poem/2217135 : FirstScript - Pleiades
allpoetry.com/Poem/2165036 : Existentialism - Acrostic
allpoetry.com/poem/2151363 : Memories of the Waves - Duette
allpoetry.com/Poem/2049793 : Ostentation - Acrostic
allpoetry.com/Poem/2049750 : Perfection Rebuilt - Sestina
allpoetry.com/Poem/2036359 : Silent Prayer - Sestina
allpoetry.com/poem/2034496 : Mermaid Murmurs - Acrostic
allpoetry.com/poem/2007366 : Penguins Doing Aerobics - Acrostic
allpoetry.com/poem/2007334 : Eternally Dark - Acrostic
allpoetry.com/Poem/1976670 : Veiled Feelings Bend Gracefully - Acrostic
allpoetry.com/poem/1893431 : Hope to Escape - Paradelle
allpoetry.com/poem/1888715 : Unchained Melody - Acrostic
allpoetry.com/Poem/1880882 : By Your Side - Acrostic
allpoetry.com/Poem/1878391 : Innocence - Triptych
allpoetry.com/poem/1859160 : Unseen Angel - Rictameter
allpoetry.com/poem/1858184 : The Candles Light Your Face - Cinquain Garland
allpoetry.com/Poem/1857670 : Tears - Nonet
allpoetry.com/Poem/1854045 : The Chains Within - Acrostic
allpoetry.com/Poem/1851670 : Building Dreams - Cinquain Garland
allpoetry.com/Poem/1851365 : Grammy - Tryptich
allpoetry.com/Poem/1848892 : Unwritten - Acrostic
allpoetry.com/Poem/1816987 : The Rose - Tryptich
allpoetry.com/Poem/1843302 : Scorching sunbeams - Haiku
And finally... the rest of my work !
allpoetry.com/Poem/2249636 : Picture-Perfect
allpoetry.com/Poem/2185016 : Under Construction
allpoetry.com/Poem/2177328 : Non Omnis Moriar
allpoetry.com/Poem/2177288 : Purple Cloaks
allpoetry.com/Poem/2159988 : Yesterday and Tomorrow
allpoetry.com/Poem/2013793 : I Fly
allpoetry.com/Poem/2007282 : To Be Yours
allpoetry.com/Poem/1996396 : Nothing Is Mine
allpoetry.com/poem/1996285 : Shades Of Love
allpoetry.com/poem/1995011 : Free
allpoetry.com/Poem/1994996 : The Day I Met You
allpoetry.com/Poem/1976913 : I Am
allpoetry.com/Poem/1968884 : One Glance
allpoetry.com/poem/1962731 : Repainted Vision
allpoetry.com/poem/1937405 : Nascent Vapours
allpoetry.com/Poem/1933616 : Within
allpoetry.com/poem/1925381 : Naked Abandon
allpoetry.com/Poem/1925312 : Salted Dreams
allpoetry.com/Poem/1888273 : New Feathers
allpoetry.com/Poem/1888214 : Courage
allpoetry.com/Poem/1888117 : Chained
allpoetry.com/Poem/1878486 : Shimmering Ripples
allpoetry.com/Poem/1878453 : Yellowing Proof
allpoetry.com/Poem/1859149 : I Will Move Away
allpoetry.com/Poem/1853595 : Soul Flew Free
allpoetry.com/Poem/1853549 : After I'm Gone
allpoetry.com/Poem/1852074 : When These Days Pass Me By
allpoetry.com/Poem/1848956 : It Was Me
allpoetry.com/Poem/1842104 : Embrace
allpoetry.com/Poem/1842000 : Little Wings
allpoetry.com/Poem/1841133 : I Surrender
allpoetry.com/Poem/1839116 : I Can't
allpoetry.com/Poem/1839092 : White Paper
allpoetry.com/Poem/1839083 : Somedays
allpoetry.com/Poem/1824936 : One More Turn
allpoetry.com/Poem/1824598 : Different Eyes
allpoetry.com/Poem/1822924 : Ghost
allpoetry.com/Poem/1822662 : All For Nothing
allpoetry.com/Poem/1816856 : Vanishing Point
allpoetry.com/Poem/1731515 : Eyes
allpoetry.com/Poem/1709962 : Borrowed Soul
allpoetry.com/Poem/1709882 : No Smiles
allpoetry.com/Poem/1705637 : Ocean's Moon
My friends on AP - few, but all special special souls
My mentor and friend Ian ... a must read on AP
allpoetry.com/poets/chasingtheday
Cynical old man, but a gem
allpoetry.com/poets/cynic
Eric ... he's not at AP now, but his poems still are
allpoetry.com/poets/rogueriverpoet
Alex ... one of my few friends here
allpoetry.com/poets/floorboards
John ... he found me on AP, but I'm glad he did now
allpoetry.com/poets/a%20drop%20of%20light
David ... very new here, but very good too
allpoetry.com/poets/david%20michaels
A gentleman from my city, always around with a smile and advice
allpoetry.com/poets/karabi
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- I am a 22 year old girl (India)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a wandering soul, searching for my calling.
- I help out as a oldpoetry researcher
- I am in the groups Dead Poets Society, Incredible India, India the Great, Oldpoetry and Friends, System of a Down
- I have 1,421 comments, 2 contests
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ian sawicki on September 9, 2006I rewrote your poem
FirstScript
Flowers roam beauty's realm; delicate thoughts
inside the heart beating with love's passion,
rain dances beside her cool summer smiles;
singing to the heaven's mystery where
robotic worlds wink imagination.
Softly sliding seductive scenery
cruises dreams; fulfilment's sanctuary,
reality waits for another time
in the future's welcoming arms of peace,
pleasantly perfecting generous laughs,
the whole world skips rainbows for her pleasure. -
eternalpoet on August 26, 2006My earliar comments I made on your poems got deleted.. thats why I had to comment on them again...
Again, previously the contest pages had some problems, so it didnt really let me see the pics... I am happy, more than happy to have read them again and thus understand them in a better way
Hope you didnt mind my "twice commenting" !!
take cares and have a nice time
shya
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eternalpoet on August 26, 2006All the links on the main page..
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I am trying to improve my form writing skills too...apparently I dont like my works when it comes to Form Poetry...
anyways.. take cares and have a nice time
- Vic
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Epitome Of Man on August 3, 2006Thank you for your comments, my dear. I used to thrive off the negative feedback I received for my poetry, but after a few of my poems were banned, I gave up on posting anything. Nowadays I post the odd thing, but nothing that I know will rub people up the wrong way. I shall return the favour very soon.
