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For a limited time you may download copies of my e-book free of charge by clicking the link below. I fought with the interface at Lulu and lost. It simply tells me there is an error in converting the .doc file to a .pdf file. Cricketjeff tried converting it, and I downloaded a converter, yet none of them render it accurately, so, c'est la vie, if I can't sell it, I'll give it away.

Here's the link: Grieves of Lass [50 megabytes, requires Word 2003 or newer!]

At this juncture it doesn't have a cover, so you're just getting the innards. Anyway, I hope you like what's there.

Jim

Last seen 1 day ago. Member since January 31, 2004.
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I have 4,694 comments, 17 contests, 6 poems

My Poetry

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Mr. Gorbachev, Set Your Verses Free

Not a revised balance sheet editing technique to reflect the servitude of indentured appliances beyond the statute of limitations.

44 lines, 12 comments, November 5. In de-sophisticated robots, lump-sum dish cleaning, not vacuum sweepers
Learning Yiddish

13 lines, 18 comments, October 31. In Adult, Yiddish
When Karma's Much Worse Than The "Can" (circa 1868)

128 lines, 35 comments, October 25. In Humor
The Spanish Main (street)

When you sieze the easy blossoms on a honeysuckled hill
when your lily licking lovers try to get their daily thrill

25 lines, 24 comments, October 15. In Abstract, Rhym-o-mania, Weird

Guest Book

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waydownuponjoy : I often wonder ... on September 16

what made you go? I stopped in today to see if you were back and Yes!, indeed you had looked in yesterday! It's awful to be addicted to this site and yet ... we can't help ourselves can we? jy
Image and Visions on August 21

Just wanted to say hey, Hey.
Pattiboo : re my poem Memories of me mum on July 25

Thank you for your very welcome critique of my poem. You are right punctuation is something I don't seem able to get a grasp on, either not enough or too much. Starting each line with a capital? I find it very hard not to because most of the poetry I read is written that way and I have always done the same. No excuses I know but old habits die hard. Thank you again for your help I will try harder with both. Pat
albymyheart on July 14

I see you have done a snagglepuss, just before I discovered you. I read some of your comments (as there are no poems to read) and you seem to be someone I would have liked to comment on me. I hope you change your mind and return...Alby